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30天中文写作挑战 (6/30) - 和朋友出去 昨天下班然后， 我跟朋友到酒廊去了。 那地方是一个啤酒的酒廊，可是我不喜欢喝啤酒， 所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了小菜。 我的男朋友带来了一个同事。他很有意思，我们说说了电影。 别朋友对我们报了她有新的工作。我对她很高兴。 毕竟， 我们赏识了这个时候。 我和我朋友尝试早走， 但是火车很迟到了，所以我们良久等了。 我晚睡觉了，今天我很累。 Hi, I am still keeping my resolution for day 6 of the challenge. Thank you in advance for your support and comments! Here is the English translation of what I want to say : Yesterday after I finished work, I went to a bar with some friends. This place was a beer bar, but I don’t like to drink beer, so I took a juice. We also ate some appetizers. My boyfriend had brought one of his colleague, he was very interesting, we talk about movies. Another friends told us that she had a new job. I was really happy for her. All in all, we really appreciated this moment. My boyfriend and I tried to leave early, but our train arrive very late so we had to wait for a long time. I went to sleep late, so I was tired today.

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30天中文写作挑战 (6/30) - 和朋友出去

昨天下班然后， 我跟朋友到酒廊去了。
那地方是一个啤酒的酒廊，可是我不喜欢喝啤酒， 所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了小菜。
我的男朋友带来了一个同事。他很有意思，我们说说谈论了电影。
别朋友对我们报了说她有了新的工作，我对为她很感到高兴。
毕竟总而言之， 我们很感激赏识了这个时刻时候。
我和我朋友尝试早走提早离开， 但是火车很迟到了，所以我们良久等更久了。
我晚睡觉了，今天我很累所以很晚睡觉。




Hi, I am still keeping my resolution for day 6 of the challenge. Thank you in advance for your support and comments! Here is the English translation of what I want to say :

Yesterday after I finished work, I went to a bar with some friends. This place was a beer bar, but I don’t like to drink beer, so I took a juice. We also ate some appetizers. My boyfriend had brought one of his colleague, he was very interesting, we talk about movies. Another friends told us that she had a new job. I was really happy for her. All in all, we really appreciated this moment. My boyfriend and I tried to leave early, but our train arrive very late so we had to wait for a long time. I went to sleep late, so I was tired today.
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30天中文写作挑战 (6/30) - 和朋友出去

昨天下班后， 我跟朋友到酒廊去了。
那地方是一个啤酒的酒廊，可是我不喜欢喝啤酒， 所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了小菜。
我的男朋友带来了一位同事。他很有意思，我们谈论了电影。
另外一个朋友告诉我们她有新的工作。我为她感到很高兴。 总之， 我们这一刻很感激。
我和我朋友尝试早走， 但是火车很晚才到，所以我们等了很久。
我很晚才睡觉，所以今天我很累。




Hi, I am still keeping my resolution for day 6 of the challenge. Thank you in advance for your support and comments! Here is the English translation of what I want to say :

Yesterday after I finished work, I went to a bar with some friends. This place was a beer bar, but I don’t like to drink beer, so I took a juice. We also ate some appetizers. My boyfriend had brought one of his colleague, he was very interesting, we talk about movies. Another friends told us that she had a new job. I was really happy for her. All in all, we really appreciated this moment. My boyfriend and I tried to leave early, but our train arrive very late so we had to wait for a long time. I went to sleep late, so I was tired today.
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昨天下班然后， 我跟朋友到酒廊去了。
那地方是一个啤酒的酒廊，可是我不喜欢喝啤酒， 所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了小菜。
我的男朋友带来了一个同事。他很有意思，我们说说了电影。
别朋友对我们报了她有新的工作。我对她很高兴。
毕竟， 我们赏识了这个时候。
我和我朋友尝试早走， 但是火车很迟到了，所以我们良久等了。
我晚睡觉了，今天我很累。

昨天下班之后，我跟朋友们到酒吧去了。那是一个啤酒酒吧，可我不爱喝啤酒，所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了点开胃菜。

我的男朋友带来了一位他的同事，他很有意思，我们聊了聊电影。

另一个朋友对我们说她有了新的工作，我们都很为她高兴。

总之，我们很享受这段时光。

我和朋友们想要早点离开，但是火车晚点时间很长，所以我们不得不等了很久。

我昨晚很晚才睡，所以我今天很累。

"酒廊" en chinois veut dire qu'une chambre pour les VIPs. "赏识" veut dire que s'il y a quelqu'un qui a fait quelque chose de génial et on éprouve de l'estime pour lui. Donc, ici, c'est pas très approprié. Mais dans certains cas, on peut aussi traduire "apprécier" par "赏识"

J'ai l'impression que les Français aiment bien les bars car ça se voit très facilement avec tous les Français que je connais, est-ce que j'ai raison? En Chine, je crois que c'est plutôt les jeunes aiment les bars, entre l'âge de 15 ans et 35 ans, mais les plus âgés ne les aiment pas vraiment. 


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30天中文写作挑战 (6/30) - 和朋友出去

昨天下班然后， 我跟朋友到酒廊去了。
那地方是一个啤酒的酒廊，可是我不喜欢喝啤酒， 所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了小菜。
我的男朋友带来了一个同事。他很有意思，我们说说了(谈论了）电影。
别的朋友对（跟）我们报了（说）她有新的工作。我对她（为此）很高兴。
毕竟， 我们赏识了这个时候。
我和我朋友尝试（想要）早走， 但是火车很迟到了（才到），所以我们良久等了（等了良久）。
我晚睡觉了，今天我很累。




Hi, I am still keeping my resolution for day 6 of the challenge. Thank you in advance for your support and comments! Here is the English translation of what I want to say :

Yesterday after I finished work, I went to a bar with some friends. This place was a beer bar, but I don’t like to drink beer, so I took a juice. We also ate some appetizers. My boyfriend had brought one of his colleague, he was very interesting, we talk about movies. Another friends told us that she had a new job. I was really happy for her. All in all, we really appreciated this moment. My boyfriend and I tried to leave early, but our train arrive very late so we had to wait for a long time. I went to sleep late, so I was tired today.

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30天中文写作挑战 (6/30) - 和朋友出去

昨天下班然后， 我跟一些朋友到酒吧廊去了。
那地方是一个啤酒吧的酒廊，可是我不喜欢喝啤酒， 所以我点了果汁。我们也吃了小菜。
我的男朋友带来了他的一个同事。他很有意思，我们聊说说了电影。
另一个别朋友告诉对我们报了她有了新的工作。我为对她感到很高兴。
总之毕竟， 我们真的很感激（享受？）这一刻赏识了这个时候。
我和我男朋友打算尝试早点走， 但是火车晚点很迟到了，所以我们良久等了很久。
我很晚才睡我晚睡觉了，所以今天我很累。




Hi, I am still keeping my resolution for day 6 of the challenge. Thank you in advance for your support and comments! Here is the English translation of what I want to say :

Yesterday after I finished work, I went to a bar with some friends. This place was a beer bar, but I don’t like to drink beer, so I took a juice. We also ate some appetizers. My boyfriend had brought one of his colleague, he was very interesting, we talk about movies. Another friends told us that she had a new job. I was really happy for her. All in all, we really appreciated this moment. My boyfriend and I tried to leave early, but our train arrive very late so we had to wait for a long time. I went to sleep late, so I was tired today.

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