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Hiking the Seorak Mountain -1 Last friday, we went to the Seoraksan when work finished. Our hiking plan was 2 nights and 3 days. It was so far from here and the distance was about 500km. Usually it tooks 4~5 hours by the car. On the way to go to Seoraksan, we stopped by the rest area for the rest, eatting, refueling. At 23:00 finally we arrived at the motel around by hiking enterance. We were so tired so had one beer and just slept like a dog. Nextday morning we woke up at 5:00 and had a brief breakfast and left to the enterance taking some snacks. I was tired to not enough sleep but as soon as enter the enterance, tired was gone. Many birds twitterd and the air was so fresh. I was exciting that it was first time mountain over an altitude of 1,000km. The very early in the morning, there were many people climbing the mountain.

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Hiking the Seorak Mountain -1

Last Friday when work was over, we went to the Seoraksan., we went to the Seoraksan when work finished. Our hiking plan was 2 nights and 3 days.  Our plan was to hike for 2 nights and 3 days. It was so very far from here where we live and the distance was about 500km. Usually it tooks takes 4-5 hours by the car. On the way to go to Seoraksan, we stopped by the rest area for the rest, eatting, refueling to relax, eat, and refuel. At 23:00 finally we arrived  we finally arrived at the motel, which was near the around by hiking enterance entrance. We were so tired so we each had one beer and then just slept like a dog. Next day The next morning we woke up at 5:00 and had a brief breakfast and left to the enterance headed for the entrance, taking some snacks. I was tired to not enough sleep for lack of sleep but as soon as enter we went through (I used 'went through' because you use 'entrance' later in the clause, and if you use 'enter' it sounds repetitive) the enterance entrance, tired the tiredness was gone. ManyBirds twittered and the air was so fresh. I was exciting excited that it was first time I was climbing a mountain over an altitude of 1,000km. The Even very early in the morning, there were many people climbing the mountain.

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