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My last trip My last trip was so amazing. I went to Rio de Janeiro to celebrate the New Year's Eve party in Copacabana beach. The city was so excited and agitated, there was a lot of people from many states of Brazil also from the others countries. I visited some beautiful places that I had saw before by TV or pictures, like Corcovado, Cristo Redentor and Jardim Botânico (Botanic Garden). I drank the original brazilian drink called Caipirinha and I ate Feijoada as well. When was arrived the hour to start the Fireworks everybody came in to Copacabana Beach and took their places in this great popular party. It was great.

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My last trip

My last trip was so amazing.
I went to Rio de Janeiro to celebrate New Year's Eve on Copacabana beach.
The city was so excited and agitated and there was a lot of people from many states of Brazil and also from other countries.
I visited some beautiful places that I had seen before on TV or pictures, like Corcovado, Cristo Redentor and Jardim Botânico (Botanic Garden).
I drank the original Brazilian drink Caipirinha and I ate Feijoada as well.
When the hour to start the Fireworks came, everybody came to the Copacabana Beach and took their places in this great popular party.
It was great.

Very well written!

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