The happiest day of my life!

There have been several happy days during along my life but, without any doubt, the happiest of them was when I arrived in San Francisco, CA to spend a fortnights holiday.
Moreover, I was celebrating that I had passed successfully the public state competitive examination successfully and I had/would become became a civil servant.
I was looking forward to travelling to this wonderful city because it's the place in the world I like most. I had seen watched this city on the TV hundreds of times, but being there was an amazing experience.
Despite my happiness, at first, I was a little worried about people carrying guns everywhere and anytime but, this fear wasn't justified. Every American we met was extremely kind to with us and we always felt safe anytime, even walking along the street in the middle of the night.
The only thing I have to complain about this fantastic city is the fact that probably, San Francisco is the most expensive city I've visited in my entire life. I realised of that when a waitress from a road diner asked us for a twenty dollars tip after our first lunch. Both of us were petrified.
Anyway, I want to go come back there but first, I need to save a huge amount of money!

The happiest day of my life!

There have been several happy days along my life but, without any doubt, the happier of them was when I arrived in San Frnacisco, CA to spend a fortnight holiday.

>I have had many happy days in my life, but, without a doubt, the days I spent in San Francisco, where I spend a fortnight hoilday , were among the happiest  .

Moreover, I was  celebrating that I had passed successfully the public state competitive examination and I became a civil servant.

> Moreover, I was also celebrating my successful completion of a public sevice competitive examination ,and that enabled me to become a civil servant.

I was looking forward to travelling to this wonderful city because it is the place in the whole world that I like the most.

I had seen this city on the TV hundreds of times, but being there was an amazing experience.

>I had seen this city on TV hundreds of times and to be there will definately be an amazing experience.

Despite my happiness, at first, I was initially a little worried about the people over there who seemed to be carrying their guns everywhere and anytime but, this fear wasn't justified. Every American we met was extremely kind to us, and we felt safe all the time, even when walking along a street in the middle of the night.
The only thing I have to complain about this fantastic city is the fact that probably, San Francisco is probably the most expensive city I've visited in my entire life. I realised of that when a waitress working for a roadside cafe from a road diner asked us for a twenty dollars tip from us after our first lunch in the city . Both of us were shocked.
Anyway, I want to go back there but first, I need to save a huge amount of money!