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Writing about Self-introduction
Hi Everyone!!I´m Susana and I have created a discussion group about healthy food.
I´m 29 years old and live in Madrid in a flat with flatmates. I´m an office assistant in an international transport
company. I´m study English every afternoon, because some day I would like to get a better job. I like to do sport and especially to run. When I have free time and I like to read too. My favourite kind of book is a romantic novel.
My biggest passion is food because I love to eat but I love healthy food. I believe that this kind of food
can be better too for our bodies. Besides I have a lot of recipes about diet and their benefits that I would like to share with your in the discussion. I´m sending a photo of my last dish !!
I´m looking forward to learning more about healthy food from you all.
and I hope I can contribute something too!!
Best wishes,
Susana.
Very well written and bonne appetite!
Writing about Self-introduction (This is grammatically correct, but 'Self Introduction' would suffice)
Hi, everyone!
I´m Susana and I have created a invited discussion group about healthy food.
I´m 29 years old and I live in Madrid, I live in a flat with other flatmates. I´m an office assistant in an international transport company. I study English every afternoon because some day I would like to get a better job work. I like to do sports, especially to run, when I have free time and I like to read, too. My favourite kind of books are romantic novels.
My biggest passion is the food because I love to eat, but I love the healthy food, as I believe that this kind of food can be better too, for our bodies. Besides, I have a lot of recipes about diets and their benefits that I would like to share with you in the discussion. I´m sending a photo of my last dish !!
I´m also looking forward to learning more about healthy food from you all and I hope, I can contribute something, too!!
Best wishes,
Susana
Brilliant write up! I would like to learn about healthy diets as well. Also, it would be lovely to learn the basics of Spanish, and I can help you with English =)
Writing about Self-introduction
Hi Everyone!!
I´m Susana and I have created a discussion group about healthy food.
I´m 29 years old and I live in Madrid, I live in a flat with other flatmates. I´m office assistant in a international transport
company. I study english every afternoon, because one day I would like to get a better work. I like to do sport specially
run, when I have free time and I like to read too, my favourite kind of book is a romantic novels.
my biggest passion is food because I love to eat but I love the healthy food.I believe that this kind of food
can be better too for our body. Besides I have a lot of recipes about diet and their benefits that I would Like to share with your in the discussion. I´m sending a photo of my last dish !!
I´m looking forward to learn much about healthy food from you all.
and I hope I can contribute something too!!
Best wishes,
Susana.
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