Rainy day
It has been raining for a whole week, so I just don't want to go out. My family wlan has failed to work since last Sunday. That makes me really anonying at home, so I called someone to repair the network and it recovered to work today finally. Then I watched a movie called zootopia on my PC. I have been looking forward to watching it for a long time since I missed it when it was available in the cinema, but sometimes I just forget it again when I am free. It's quite an interesting film and also a typical production of American movie industry. The weak character gains courage, insists on his/her own big dream, defeats the opposites and becomes a hero. Maybe the movie tries to let us learn something about life just like most other movies do, but I am still happy with it because it seems I indeed feel something funny and warm while spending my leisure time.
I must use a lot of wrong words in my entry or words that you native speakers would not say. I hope to get your corrections. Thanks a lot
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Rainy day
It has been raining for a whole week, so I just don't want to go out. My family's wlan network have not worked since last Sunday. That makes me really annoyed being at home, so I called someone to repair the network and it recovered to work today it finally started to work. Then I watched a movie called zootopia on my PC. I have been looking forward to watching it for a long time since I missed it when it was available in the cinema, but sometimes I just would forget it again when I am free. It's quite an interesting film and also a typical production of an American movie industry. The weak character gains courage, insists on his/her own big dream, defeats the opposites and becomes a hero. Maybe the movie tries to let us learn something about life just like most other movies do, but I am still happy with it because it seems that, I indeed feel felt something funny and warm while spending during my leisure time.I must used a lot of wrong words in my entry or words that you native speakers would not say or use. I hope to get your corrections. Thanks a lot
Great entry! Keep it up!
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