A Positive Change to My Life
It was more than a decade ago when I was a freshman at university. I started working out on a daily basis, which I think was a positive change to my life.
I began doing various kinds aerobics for exercise at the time. There was a playground on our campus, very close to the dormitory where I was living. I used to take a stroll with a few buddies after dinner in the evenings there. I also particularly enjoyed cycling by myself in the wilderness on weekends when the sun was shinning, because I could take a fresh breath.
Doing so much exercise was unimaginable for me at high school partly because of the high study pressure. It was also because I was unaware of the importance of exercise. As a result, I was often breathless even after a short while of strenuous activity, like climbing stairs. I can tell you something, when I was a teenager at school, I almost always failed in physical fitness tests, which seemed to be a huge mountain for me to climb. Within less than a year of regular exercise, I had become much healthier than ever before. I no long needed to worry about these tests.
That's pretty much what I would like to talk about this change to my life.
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A Positive Change in My Life
It was more than a decade ago when I was a freshman at university. I started working out on a daily basis, which I think was a positive change in my life.At the time, I began doing various kinds (better to say types) of aerobics for exercises . There was a playground in our campus, very close to the dormitory where I was living, where I used to take a stroll with a few buddies after dinner in the evenings there. I also particularly enjoyed cycling by myself in the wilderness on the weekends when (as) the sun was shinning, because I could take a fresh breath (better to say "I could take a breath of fresh air" )
Doing so much exercise was unimaginable for me at high school partly because of the high study pressure (better to say " because of the pressure in school"). It was also because I was unaware of the importance of exercise. As a result, I was often breathless even after a short while period of strenuous activity, like climbing the stairs. I can tell you something (try a different phrase like "In the past", or "Moreover, in the past"), when I was a teenager at school, I almost always failed in physical fitness tests, which seemed to be a huge mountain for me to climb. Within less than a year of regular exercise, I had become much healthier than ever before. I and no long needed to worry about these tests.
That's pretty much what I would like to talk about this change in my life. (This change in my life is pretty much what I wanted to talk about")
Good job- you write really well! You have only small mistakes (which are completely normal) but overall you have clear communication and able to express yourself well:) Good luck in your studies!
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A Positive Change to My Life
It was more than a decade ago when I was a freshman at university. I started working out on a daily basis, which I think made/was a positive change in my life.
I began doing various kinds of aerobic exercises for exercise at the time. There was a playground on our campus, very close to the dormitory to where I was living. I used to take a stroll with a few buddies after dinner in the evenings there. I also particularly enjoyed cycling by myself in the wilderness on weekends when the sun was shinning, because I could enjoy the fresh air.
Doing so much exercise was unimaginable to me at high school partly because of the intense academic pressure. It was also because I was unaware of the importance of exercise. As a result, I was often breathless -- even after (doing)a short while of strenuous activity, such as waking up/climbing a flight of stairs. I also like to/can tell you something: when I was a teenager at school, I almost always failed my physical fitness tests, something which then seemed to be rather too huge a mountain for me to climb. Within less than a year of regular exercise, I had become much healthier than I ever was before. I no longer have/needed to worry about these tests (anymore).
That's pretty much what I would like to talk about regarding this change in my life.
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