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Doing my best. When I was a kid, I would really like surfing. But I don't swim and I had feared the sea. All my friends surfing in the summer, and I getting along on the beach just watching they. I decided to learn swimming and surfing. Swimming it was easier because I love water and swimming pools. In 4 months I get ready to my first lesson to surfing. On the beach, my teacher, give me the basic of surfing technics and told me that I need to into the sea, to try on. Then, I went and I fall, no one time, but millions of time. Still I never give up. I knew it's hard, besides, everything it's hard, in the beginning, I tried again, and again, then finally, I did. For this reason, until now, I never give up or stopped to do something, because, it's hard or I don't know how made. I know that I am capable of learning and do my best.

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Doing my best.

When I was a kid, I would really liked surfing.
But I don't couldn't swim and I had feared the sea. All my friends went surfing in the summer, and I would getting along on the beach just watching them they. A better way to say this would be "I would sit/hang out on the beach just watching them" 
I decided to learn how to swimming and surfing. Swimming it was easier because I love water and swimming pools. In 4 months I get was ready to take my first lesson to  in surfing. On the beach, my teacher give gave me the basic of surfing techniques and told me that I need to go into the sea, to try on continue. 
Then I went and I fell, not one time, but millions of times. Still I never gave up. I knew it would be hard, besides, everything it's is hard, in the beginning. I tried again, and again, then finally, I did it.
For this reason, until  even now, I never give up or stopped to doing something because it's hard or I don't know how to do it made. I know that I am capable of learning and do my best.

I hope my corrections make sense! :) 

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