In search of a dream job. (Part 1)
It's not a simple task to find a job that will fulfill all your wishes at once. Right now my goal is a position of junior level where I can grow as a professional and take new challenges subsequently. I want to work for a company where a can build a career. I'd like to get more management responsibilities in the future and get more involved in supply chain management. Supply chain management is an interesting field for me since I had been studing at University. The main theme of my diploma project was a supply chain of ALROSA, major Russian manufacturer of diamonds. The company has its diamond mines in Yakutia, in the Far East of Russia. Yakutia is famous of its severe winters. Some of the lowest natural temperatures ever recorded have been here.There is no navigation from November to May and it's very hard to deliver any cargo by trucks. So during the winter the main mode of transportation is airplane. To maintain the supply of the diamond mines the procurement have to be planned very accurately. Fortunately now we have IT solutions that make it an easier task. That was an interesting project for me, but I see that this indusry requires years of loyalty and hardest work to build a career.
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In search of a dream job. (Part 1)
It's not a simple task to find a job that will fulfill all your wishes at once. Right now my goal is a position of junior level where I can grow as a professional and take on new challenges subsequently. I want to work for a company where I a can build a career. I'd like to get more management responsibilities in the future and get more involved in supply chain management. Supply chain management is an interesting field for me since I had been studing at University. The main theme of my diploma project was a supply chain of ALROSA, a major Russian manufacturer of diamonds. The company has its diamond mines in Yakutia, in the Far East of Russia. Yakutia is famous for of its severe winters. Some of the lowest natural temperatures ever recorded have been there.There is no navigation from November to May and it's very hard to deliver any cargo by trucks. So during the winter the main mode of transportation is airplane. To maintain the supply of the diamond mines the procurement have to be planned very accurately. Fortunately now we have IT solutions that make it an easier task. That was an interesting project for me, but I see that this industry requires years of loyalty and hardest work to build a career.I had been studing Do you mean "I have been studying it at university" or "I studied it at university" ?
Wow diamond mines! So did you work at the diamond mines?
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In search of a dream job. (Part 1)
It's not a simple task to find a job that will fulfill all your wishes at once. Right now my goal is a to find a position of junior level where I can grow as a professional and take new challenges. Initially, I want to work for a company where a I can build a career. I'd like to get more management responsibilities in the future and get more involved in supply chain management. Supply chain management is an interesting field for me since I had have been stuyding at the University. The main theme of my diploma project/thesis was a to supply chain of ALROSA, major Russian manufacturer of diamonds. The company has its diamond mines in Yakutia, in the Far East of Russia. Yakutia is famous of for its severe winter. Some of the lowest natural temperatures ever recorded are from here.There is no navigation from November to May and it's very hard to deliver any cargo by trucks. So during the winter, the main mode of transportation is airplane. To maintain the supply of to the diamond mines, the procurement have has to be planned very accurately. Fortunately now we have IT solutions that make it an easier task. That was an interesting project for me, but I see that this indusry requires years of loyalty and hardwork to build a career.The main theme of my diploma project/thesis was supply chain of ALROSA, major Russian manufacturer of diamonds.
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The main theme of my diploma project/thesis was to improve the supply chain of ALROSA, major Russian manufacturer of diamonds.
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In search of a dream job. (Part 1)
It's not a simple task to find a job that will fulfill all your wishes at once. Right now my goal is (to find) a position of at a junior level where I can grow as a professional and take on new challenges subsequently. I want to work for a company where a can build a career. I'd like to get more management responsibilities in the future and get more involved in supply chain management. Supply chain management is an interesting field for me since I had been studing because I studied it at uUniversity. The main theme of my diploma project was a the supply chain of ALROSA, a major Russian manufacturer of diamonds. The company has its diamond mines in Yakutia, in the Far East of Russia. Yakutia is famous of its severe winters. Some of the lowest natural temperatures ever recorded have been here.There is no navigation access from November to May and it's very hard to deliver any cargo by trucks. So during the winter the main mode of transportation is by airplane. To maintain the supply of the diamond mines the procurement have has to be planned very accurately. Fortunately now we now have IT solutions that makes it an easier task. That was an interesting project for me, but I see that this indusry requires years of loyalty and very hardest work to build a career.Another well organised and well written piece, Daria. What a fascinating business! I look forward to Part 2
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