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宝宝生病了 :(
我宝宝今天生病了。他早晨4:30哭着醒了过来,然后回去睡觉,但从那时直到早上6:30他还是时不时地哭。他起床之后,我摸了摸他的身体,发现他身体(should: you feel his body hot)很热,因此量了他的体温。他的体温快华氏100度(正常的体温是华氏98.6度)。除了发烧和哭闹之外,他别的病状都没有。我给他布洛芬,但吃了之后他仍然发着烧。现在他想睡午觉,不过他还是断断续续地哭,很可怜!(My baby has been sick today. He woke up crying around 4:30am. He went back to sleep, but cried off and on until 6:30am. After he got up, I realized that his body felt hot, and took his temperature. It was almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (normal body temperature is 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit). Besides fever and feeling bad, he has no other symptoms. I gave him some ibuprofen, but even after taking it, he still has a fever. Now he is trying to take a nap, but he keeps crying periodically. Poor little guy!)
in spoken(Chinese logic)
我宝宝生病了,今天早晨四点半他哭着醒了过来,然后回去继续睡觉,但从那时直到早上九点半他还是时不时地哭.他起床后,我摸了摸他的身体,发现很热,所以我凉了他的体温.华氏100度(正常体温是华氏98.6度),除了发烧和哭闹之外没有其它症状(another phrase).我给他布洛芬,但吃了之后还是发着烧.现在他想睡午觉,不过还是断断续续的哭,真(interjection)的很可怜
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宝宝生病了 :(
我(的)宝宝今天生病了。他早晨4:30哭着醒了过来,然后回去睡觉(又睡着了),但从那时直到早上6:30他继续(仍然)时不时地哭。他起床之后,我摸了摸他的身体,发现他感到很热,因此量了他的体温。他的体温快(将近)华氏100度(正常的体温是华氏98.6度)。除了发烧和哭闹之外,他别的病状都没有(没有别的症状)。我给他(吃了)布洛芬,但吃了之后他仍然发着烧。现在他想睡午觉,不过他还是断断续续地哭,很可怜让我很心疼。(这种情况下应该是"你觉得很心疼,他这么难受"这种意思。)!(My baby has been sick today. He woke up crying around 4:30am. He went back to sleep, but cried off and on until 6:30am. After he got up, I realized that his body felt hot, and took his temperature. It was almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (normal body temperature is 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit). Besides fever and feeling bad, he has no other symptoms. I gave him some ibuprofen, but even after taking it, he still has a fever. Now he is trying to take a nap, but he keeps crying periodically. Poor little guy!)
宝宝生病了 :(
我宝宝今天生病了。他早晨4:30哭着醒了过来,然后回去睡觉,但从那时直到早上6:30他继续时不时地哭。他起床之后,我摸了摸他的身体,发现他感到很热,因此量了他的体温。他的体温快华氏100度(正常的体温是华氏98.6度)。除了发烧和哭闹之外,他别的病状都没有。我给他布洛芬,但吃了之后他仍然发着烧。现在他想睡午觉,不过他还是断断续续地哭,很可怜!"他感到很热" means that was his own feeling, so actually you can never 发现他感到很热 unless he tells you this.
(My baby has been sick today. He woke up crying around 4:30am. He went back to sleep, but cried off and on until 6:30am. After he got up, I realized that his body felt hot, and took his temperature. It was almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (normal body temperature is 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit). Besides fever and feeling bad, he has no other symptoms. I gave him some ibuprofen, but even after taking it, he still has a fever. Now he is trying to take a nap, but he keeps crying periodically. Poor little guy!)
宝宝生病了 :(
我宝宝今天生病了。他早晨4:30哭着醒了过来,然后回去睡觉,但从那时直到早上6:30他继续时不时地哭。他起床之后,我摸了摸他的身体,发现他<身体>很热,因此量了他的体温。他的体温快华氏100度(正常的体温是华氏98.6度)。除了发烧和哭闹之外,他别的病状都没有。我给他布洛芬,但吃了之后他仍然发着烧。现在他想睡午觉,不过他还是断断续续地哭,很可怜!(My baby has been sick today. He woke up crying around 4:30am. He went back to sleep, but cried off and on until 6:30am. After he got up, I realized that his body felt hot, and took his temperature. It was almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (normal body temperature is 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit). Besides fever and feeling bad, he has no other symptoms. I gave him some ibuprofen, but even after taking it, he still has a fever. Now he is trying to take a nap, but he keeps crying periodically. Poor little guy!)
宝宝生病了 :(
我宝宝今天生病了。他早晨4:30哭着醒了过来,然后回去睡觉,但从那时直到早上6:30他继续时不时地哭。他起床之后,我摸了摸他的身体,(感到)发现他很热,因此量了他的体温。他的体温快华氏100度(正常的体温是华氏98.6度)。除了发烧和哭闹之外,他别的病状都没有。我给他布洛芬,但吃了之后他仍然发着烧。现在他想睡午觉,不过他还是断断续续地哭,很可怜!(My baby has been sick today. He woke up crying around 4:30am. He went back to sleep, but cried off and on until 6:30am. After he got up, I realized that his body felt hot, and took his temperature. It was almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (normal body temperature is 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit). Besides fever and feeling bad, he has no other symptoms. I gave him some ibuprofen, but even after taking it, he still has a fever. Now he is trying to take a nap, but he keeps crying periodically. Poor little guy!)
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