Schools are expected, by students, to provide a variety of courses including academic courses and leisure courses such as music or and sports, but But students also have the right to choose what they want to learn. Therefore, I think subjects offered by schools should not be limited only to courses that seem beneficial to students' future careers.

Schools need to focus more on academic courses because they lay a basic foundation for students' life lives. Courses like such as literature can enrich students' vocabulary and broaden their minds. Their reading skills and writing skills can be honed by reading the world's classics and they can have a better understanding of different cultures. They will be more open-minded and tolerant if they encounter cultural conflicts in the workplace. Other courses like mathematics helps improve students' logical thinking skills. They may view things from a different perspective instead of solving problems in a similar one way, thus, they are less likely to make mistakes in their work and accomplish their tasks cautiously and objectively.
On the other hand, subjects such as music and sports also plays an important role in students' future careers. For example, music can help them relieve stress. Students will feel frustrated if what they learn everyday are only complicated theories and principles. Music can give their brain some rest and help students study more efficiently. They may also draw inspiration from music and think creatively. When they enter the job market after graduation, their creativity and imagination can help them stand out in the cut-throat competition.
In conclusion, my opinion is that schools should not only provide core courses that are beneficial to students' future career, but also offer optional courses like music and sports as well.

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Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students' future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools are expected by students to provide a variety of courses including academic courses, music or sports. But students also have the right to choose what they want to learn. Therefore, I think subjects offered by schools should not be limited to courses that seem beneficial to students' future careers.
Schools need to focus more on academic courses because they lay a basic foundation for students' life. Courses like literature can enrich students' vocabulary and broaden their minds. Their reading and writing skills can be honed by reading the world's classics and they can obtain a better understanding of different cultures. Thus, they will be more open-minded and tolerant if they encounter cultural conflicts in the workplace. Other courses like mathematics helps improve students' logical thinking skills. They may view things from a different perspective instead of solving problems in a similar way. Thus, they are less likely to make mistakes in work and accomplish their tasks cautiously and objectively.
On the other hand, subjects such as music and sports also plays an important role in students' future career. For example, music can help them relieve stress. Students will feel frustrated if what they learn everyday are only complicated theories and principles. Music can give their brain some rest and help students study more efficiently. They may also draw inspiration from music and think creatively. When they enter the job market after graduation, their creativity and imagination can help them stand out among the cut-throat competition.
In conclusion, my opinion is that schools should not only provide core courses that are beneficial to students' future career, but offer optional courses like music and sports as well. (Pretty Damn Good, there is very little that is outright wrong here)