A Flight.

Note:

1我去过爱尔兰I have been to Ireland. 我去了爱尔兰 I went to Ireland.

2上月 is okay, but 上个月 sounds better to my ears, as it is more complete. 

.我起床比较早。一出去家门口就开始下雨。Nice, you could also write 我们一出门，外面就开始下雨.

所以我拿一行李箱，还一个女孩子，还一个伞。所以我不仅要带（着）一个女孩子，拿（着)一个行李箱，还要撑(着)一把伞。I think the English version is much more fun than Mandarin, because you use "carry" to go with your little girl, a suitcase and an umbrella.

Note: 还 can not be used directly with nouns, usually it goes with a verb, 我去了中国，还去了美国. 还要 can go with either verbs or nouns , as in  我拿了一个行李箱，还要撑一把伞(撑 is verb) and 他要了一杯茶，还要了一杯咖啡/他不仅要这个，还要那个. If you want to use 还 with a noun, then you need to use 还有. e.g.我带着一个女孩子，拿着一个行李箱，还有一把伞。

So 还+ verb; 还要+verb/noun; 还有+noun.

我们座坐火车去机场。我们进入机场，表现出示了护照，喝了一杯咖啡。 “Show” has multiple meanings in Mandarin, 表现 is one, as in 他表现出了不满, he showed his dissatisfaction. But when you show your passport, it is a special case, because you show it for a check, in this case you would need to use 出示, other cases, 我出示了我的证件.

飞机飞起来正点。飞机准点起飞。准点 sounds better to me than 正点, though you could say 飞机正点起飞.

航班花了两个小时/航班一共两个小时。但是这次飞机晚点了45分钟。
一个邻居开车来机场接我们。
A Flight.
Last month my daughter and I went to Ireland. We got up early. Just as we were going out the door it started to rain. So as well as a suitcase and a small girl I had to carry an umbrella.
We took the train to the airport. We went into the airport, showed our passports and had a cup of coffee. The plane took off on time. The flight took 2 hours. But it was delayed by 45 minutes.
A neighbour collected us from the airport in her car.

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This text is to practice some vocabulary I learnt in class, but I realise it isn't very natural sounding. I wasn't sure how to say 'a flight' - 飞机 ? or 航班 ? I would also have liked to say ' we went through the security controls', but I didn't know how to.

A flight --航班, a plane--飞机

我们通过了安检--安检 is security check. （went through security controls means "pass the security check" right?）

The text is good, only minor errors, word orders are all correct! I think you just need to pay more attention to the tense, e.g去了 vs 去过了 喝了 花了.

A Flight.

我起床比较早。  我们起床比较早。

一出去家门口就开始下雨。一出家门就开始下雨。

所以我拿一行李箱，还一个女孩子，还一个伞。所以我带一个女孩子以及一个行李箱，还必须带一把雨伞。
我们座火车去机场。我们坐火车去机场。

我们进入机场，表现护照，喝一杯咖啡。我们进入机场，出示了护照，喝了杯咖啡。

飞机飞起来正点。飞机正点起飞。

航班花两个小时。但是这次飞机晚点了45分钟。  飞机飞行了两个小时，晚点45分钟。

一邻居开车来机场接我们。一个邻居用她的车从机场接了我们。
A Flight.
Last month my daughter and I went to Ireland. We got up early. Just as we were going out the door it started to rain. So as well as a suitcase and a small girl I had to carry an umbrella.
We took the train to the airport. We went into the airport, showed our passports and had a cup of coffee. The plane took off on time. The flight took 2 hours. But it was delayed by 45 minutes.
A neighbour collected us from the airport in her car.

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This text is to practice some vocabulary I learnt in class, but I realise it isn't very natural sounding. I wasn't sure how to say 'a flight' - 飞机 ? or 航班 ? I would also have liked to say ' we went through the security controls', but I didn't know how to.

Flight   航班/飞行         A Flight 一次飞行

we went through the security controls   我们通过了安全检查。

我和女儿上月一起去过了爱尔兰。.我们起床比较早。一出去家门口就开始下雨了。所以我不仅要拿一个行李箱，带一个小女孩子，还得拿一个把伞。
我们是座坐火车去机场的。我们进入到了机场后，表现出示了护照，通过了安检，然后喝了一杯咖啡。 飞机起来正点起飞。航班花了两个小时。但是这次飞机晚点了45分钟到达。

一个邻居开车来机场接我们。 

1.using 过, means "have done sth." 我吃过了。I have eaten.      我去过了。I have been there.

2.出去 is a verb that you can have an object right after it.

3.as well as, 不仅......还；不仅......而且；

4.flight is 航班.You can say 航班晚点了，or飞机晚点了 to be the flight is delayed or the plane is delayed. To say 飞机晚点了 is more spoken than 航班晚点了。

5.Many people here suggest to say 上个月instead of 上月. It is a relatively breviary way to say 上月. It is nothing wrong about it. But 上个月 is more plain and simple. People say this more often. 

6.  "went through the security controls" is 通过了安检 tong1guo4 le an1jian3.

Well done, 罗斯！

I am happy to see you are practicing what you have learned in class!

继续努力！ji4xu4 nu3li4.

A Flight.

A Flight 搭機旅行