练习中文的好机会：妈妈团契，语言交流
今天早上我们华人教会的妈妈团契聚会了。这是一个由华人组成的团契，所以大家都会讲中文，这样我能够好好练习听力和口语。我们平时尽量去学一本教育孩子的书的一部分，但实际上做到这个很难，因为孩子们一直不停地跑来跑去吵闹。然后，我们都会吃一顿potluck午餐（就是每个人带菜分享）。下午我带了孩子去超市买冰淇淋和糖果，然后送他们去奶奶家过夜。晚上在三岁的宝宝看电影的时候，我跟一个台湾语言伙伴聊了一个小时。
(Our church moms group met this morning. This is a Chinese moms group, so everyone speaks Chinese, which is a great opportunity for me to practice listening and speaking. We try to discuss a section of a parenting book, but it’s very difficult with the kids all running around making lots of noise. After that, we always eat a potluck lunch together. In the afternoon, I took the kids to the store to get ice cream and candy, and then over to their grandmother’s house to spend the night. Then in the evening, I talked to my Taiwanese language exchange partner for an hour while the 3-year-old watched “Toy Story”.)
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练习中文的好机会：妈妈团契，语言交流
今天早上，我们华人教会的妈妈团契聚会了。这是一个由华人组成的团契，所以大家都会讲中文，对我来说这是一个很好的机会(it is a great opportunity for me)我能够好好去练习听力和口语。我们平时我们尽量去学讨论（discuss)一本教育孩子的书的一部分，但实际上做到这个很难，因为孩子们一直不停地跑来跑去吵闹制造噪音（make noise)。然后，我们都会吃一顿potluck午餐（就是每个人带菜来分享）。下午我带了孩子去超市买冰淇淋和糖果，然后送他们去奶奶家过夜。晚上在三岁的宝宝看童话电影（Toy Story) 的时候，我跟一个台湾语言伙伴聊了一个小时。(Our church moms group met this morning. This is a Chinese moms group, so everyone speaks Chinese, which is a great opportunity for me to practice listening and speaking. We try to discuss a section of a parenting book, but it’s very difficult with the kids all running around making lots of noise. After that, we always eat a potluck lunch together. In the afternoon, I took the kids to the store to get ice cream and candy, and then over to their grandmother’s house to spend the night. Then in the evening, I talked to my Taiwanese language exchange partner for an hour while the 3-year-old watched “Toy Story”.)
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练习中文的好机会：妈妈团契，语言交流
今天早上我们华人教会的妈妈团契聚会了。这是一个由华人组成的团契，所以大家都会讲中文，这样我能够好好练习听力和口语。我们平时会尽量去学一本关于教育孩子的书的一部分，但实际上很难做到这个很难，因为孩子们会一直不停地跑来跑去吵闹。然后，我们都会一起吃一顿potluck午餐（就是每个人带菜分享）。下午我带了孩子去超市买冰淇淋和糖果，然后送他们去奶奶家过夜。晚上，在三岁的宝宝看电影的时候，我跟一个台湾语言伙伴聊了一个小时。(Our church moms group met this morning. This is a Chinese moms group, so everyone speaks Chinese, which is a great opportunity for me to practice listening and speaking. We try to discuss a section of a parenting book, but it’s very difficult with the kids all running around making lots of noise. After that, we always eat a potluck lunch together. In the afternoon, I took the kids to the store to get ice cream and candy, and then over to their grandmother’s house to spend the night. Then in the evening, I talked to my Taiwanese language exchange partner for an hour while the 3-year-old watched “Toy Story”.)
“一直”和“不停”重复了，保留一个就可以了。
括号本身就含有解释的意思，所以不需要“就是”。
总的来说，你的中文已经很棒了，加油！
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练习中文的好机会：妈妈团契，语言交流
今天早上我们华人教会的妈妈团契聚会了。这是一个由华人组成的团契，所以大家都会讲中文，这样我能够好好练习听力和口语。我们平时尽量去学一本教育孩子的书的一部分，但实际上做到这个很难，因为孩子们一直不停地跑来跑去吵闹吵吵闹闹or 很吵闹。然后，我们都会吃一顿potluck午餐（就是每个人带菜分享）。下午我带了孩子去超市买冰淇淋和糖果，然后送他们去奶奶家过夜。晚上在趁三岁的宝宝看电影的时候，我跟一个台湾语言伙伴聊了一个小时。(Our church moms group met this morning. This is a Chinese moms group, so everyone speaks Chinese, which is a great opportunity for me to practice listening and speaking. We try to discuss a section of a parenting book, but it’s very difficult with the kids all running around making lots of noise. After that, we always eat a potluck lunch together. In the afternoon, I took the kids to the store to get ice cream and candy, and then over to their grandmother’s house to spend the night. Then in the evening, I talked to my Taiwanese language exchange partner for an hour while the 3-year-old watched “Toy Story”.)
你好，我是汉语教师，你写得非常好只有几个小错误，继续努力！
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练习中文的好机会：妈妈团体，语言交流
今天早上我们华人教会的妈妈团体聚会了。这是一个由华人组成的团体，所以大家都会讲中文，这样我能够好好练习听力和口语。我们试着去学一本教育孩子的书中的一部分，但实际上做到这个很难，因为孩子们一直不停地跑来跑去很吵闹。然后，我们都会吃一顿potluck午餐（就是每个人带菜分享）。下午我带了孩子去超市买冰淇淋和糖果，然后送他们去奶奶家过夜。晚上在三岁的宝宝看电影的时候，我跟一个台湾语言伙伴聊了一个小时。(Our church moms group met this morning. This is a Chinese moms group, so everyone speaks Chinese, which is a great opportunity for me to practice listening and speaking. We try to discuss a section of a parenting book, but it’s very difficult with the kids all running around making lots of noise. After that, we always eat a potluck lunch together. In the afternoon, I took the kids to the store to get ice cream and candy, and then over to their grandmother’s house to spend the night. Then in the evening, I talked to my Taiwanese language exchange partner for an hour while the 3-year-old watched “Toy Story”.)
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练习中文的好机会：妈妈团契，语言交流
今天早上我们(华人)教会团契的妈妈聚会(Our church moms group met this morning. This is a Chinese moms group, so everyone speaks Chinese, which is a great opportunity for me to practice listening and speaking. We try to discuss a section of a parenting book, but it’s very difficult with the kids all running around making lots of noise. After that, we always eat a potluck lunch together. In the afternoon, I took the kids to the store to get ice cream and candy, and then over to their grandmother’s house to spend the night. Then in the evening, I talked to my Taiwanese language exchange partner for an hour while the 3-year-old watched “Toy Story”.)
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