Chinese sentences 2

it is not far from here. --> 它离这里不远。
what do you want to do today? --> 你今天想做什么？
how do you say "word" in Chinese? -->你怎么说。。中文 你用中文怎么说‘word’？
can/do you understand? --> 你明白吗？
Are you tired? --> 你累了吗？
Do you want to take a rest? --> 你想要休息一下吗？
Do you want to drink some water? -->你想喝点水吗？
Are you ready to go? --> 你准备出去吗？
Okay let's go! 好让我们去吧
Let me carry your water :) --> 让我带着你的水 :) 让我把你的水带上。
Where do you want to go? -->你想去了哪里?
Where are we going? -->我们现在去哪里?
Now we go to my home. -->现在我们去我家。
This is my daddy! -->这是我的爸爸。
This is my older brothers girlfriend! -->这是我的哥哥的女朋友。

I am learning some base sentences so I am very thankful for any corrections :)

Chinese sentences 2

it is not far from here. --> 它离这里不远 （You should probably use 那个地方 instead of 它; since it probably refers to some concrete place）
what do you want to do today? --> 你今天想做什么？
how do you say "word" in Chinese? -->你怎么说。。中文 (请问，Word用中文怎么说）
can/do you understand? --> 你明白吗？
Are you tired? --> 你累了吗？（了 can be used for complete an action or a change in circumstances, but not here.）
Do you want to take a rest? --> 你想要休息一下吗？
Do you want to drink some water? -->你想喝点水吗？
Are you ready to go? --> 你准备去吗？(This sentence was corrected by all of the Chinese because a verb or a location must follow the word 去, unless you use it as a directional compliment, such as 出去，进去。） 
Okay let's go! 好让我们去 （Some of the Chinese who corrected above, missed this one. See above note. Should be: 我们走吧！）
Let me carry your water :) --> 让我带着你的水 : (Nothing grammatically wrong but some people changed this because lots of time, Chinese will move the object to the front of the sentence for emphasis.)
Where do you want to go? -->你想去了哪里? (了should be used if the action is completed but since you have not 去, no 了）
Where are we going? -->我们现在去哪里?
Now we go to my home. -->现在我们去我家 （现在 is not necessary. You should probably start your sentence with 那。。。(那 can mean "in that case" and end the sentence with 吧。。。 make a suggestion.;)）
This is my daddy! -->这是我的爸爸
This is my older brothers girlfriend! -->这是我的哥哥女朋友(的 in the wrong place. Don't have to use 的 when talking about close ties, 我爸，我妹妹， 我小狗，等等）, but you do need a 的 in front of girlfriend, since that's the subject, and what's in front of that is the description of her.）

I thought I would just try and explain the corrections you got since you were offered none. Also, if you interested in joining my Chinese English language group, let me know.

Chinese sentences 2

it is not far from here. --> 它离这里不远          
what do you want to do today? --> 你今天想做什么？  
how do you say "word" in Chinese? -->你怎么说。。中文  你怎样用中文说“word”?
can/do you understand? --> 你明白吗？ 
Are you tired? --> 你累了吗？     你累吗？
Do you want to take a rest? --> 你想要休息一下吗？   
Do you want to drink some water? -->你想喝点水吗？
Are you ready to go? --> 你准备去吗？  你准备好出发了吗？
Okay let's go! 好让我们去   好了，我们走吧！
Let me carry your water :) --> 让我带着你的水 :)   你的水让我来拿吧：）
Where do you want to go? -->你想去了哪里?  你想去哪儿？
Where are we going? -->我们现在去哪里?   
Now we go to my home. -->现在我们去我家
This is my daddy! -->这是我的爸爸
This is my older brothers girlfriend! -->这是我的哥哥女朋友   这是我哥哥的女朋友！

I am learning some base sentences so I am very thankful for any corrections :)

Chinese sentences 2

it is not far from here. --> 它离这里不远
what do you want to do today? --> 你今天想做什么？
how do you say "word" in Chinese? -->你怎么说。。中文，Word用中文说是：单词
can/do you understand? --> 你明白吗？
Are you tired? --> 你累了吗？
Do you want to take a rest? --> 你想要休息一下吗？
Do you want to drink some water? -->你想喝点水吗？
Are you ready to go? --> 你准备去吗？
Okay let's go! 好让我们去
Let me carry your water :) --> 让我带着你的水 :)
Where do you want to go? -->你想去了哪里?
Where are we going? -->我们现在去哪里?
Now we go to my home. -->现在我们去我家
This is my daddy! -->这是我的爸爸
This is my older brothers girlfriend! -->这是我的哥哥的女朋友

I am learning some base sentences so I am very thankful for any corrections :)

Chinese sentences 2

it is not far from here. --> 它离这里不远。
what do you want to do today? --> 你今天想做什么？
how do you say "word" in Chinese? -->你怎么说。。中文你用中文怎么说“WORD"
can/do you understand? --> 你明白吗？
Are you tired? --> 你累了吗？
Do you want to take a rest? --> 你想要休息一下吗？
Do you want to drink some water? -->你想喝点水吗？
Are you ready to go? --> 你准备去吗？
Okay let's go! 好让我们去
Let me carry your water :) --> 让我带着你的水 :) 让我带点水给你
Where do you want to go? -->你想去了哪里?
Where are we going? -->我们现在准备去哪里?
Now we go to my home. -->现在我们去我家
This is my daddy! -->这是我的爸爸
This is my older brothers girlfriend! -->这是我的哥哥的女朋友

I am learning some base sentences so I am very thankful for any corrections :)