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About environment Protection of the environment is paid much attention to all over the world as well as in my country. Global warming, the ozone layer problems, air and water pollution, industrial waste are in the centre of our attention. We live on the planet covered by waters of the World Ocean. One of the causes of global warming is burning fossil fuels for energy. It has released greenhouse gases into the Earth`s atmosphere. As the average temperature becomes higher it may cause a melting of polar ice which in its turn will cause the rising of the sea level and will have a serious impact on the sea ecosystem . Weather patterns will change with a change of climate:there will be hurricanes, earthquakes and other disasters. This is very serious problem, that`s why mane scientists try to find a way out and help the planet, but it`s important for every person to understand the necessity to protect our environment from global warming. We must do our best to reduce the green-house effect. In my opinion, first of all, scientists think we should plant large quantities of trees in tropical countries and all over the world as well. The trees will help to reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. We can also use means of transport that don`t pollute air and water. And energy -conserving sources must be found to be used in everyday life.

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About the Environment

Protection of the environment is paid much attention to all over the world as well as in my country. Global warming, the ozone layer problems, air and water pollution, industrial waste are at the centre of our attention. We live on a planet covered by waters of the World Ocean.
One of the causes of global warming is burning fossil fuels for energy. This has released greenhouse gases into the Earth's* atmosphere. As the average temperature becomes higher it may cause the melting of polar ice which in its turn will cause the rising of the sea level and will have a serious impact on the sea ecosystem . Weather patterns will change with a change of climate: there will be more hurricanes, earthquakes and other disasters. This is a very serious problem. That's why many scientists try to find a way out and help the planet, but it`s important for every person to understand the necessity to protect our environment from global warming.
We must do our best to reduce the green-house effect.
In my opinion, first of all, scientists think we should plant large quantities of trees in tropical countries and all over the world as well. The trees will help reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. We can also use means of transport that don`t pollute air and water. And energy -conserving sources must be found to be used in everyday life.

*'Earth, Moon, Sun...' are old fashioned ways to write the modern 'earth, moon, sun...' but they are still good English.

Very well written!

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