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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a girl, living in Beijing for 4 years, I like to playing sports game, watching TV, listening korean music etc. Especially, I hate noisy place, prefer to stay at home instead of going club. I am working in an American company, it request me to improve english technical, so I join here to seek friends help on it. thank you.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a woman,  whose been living in Beijing for 4 years.   I like to playing sports game, watching TV and listening to Korean music.  Especially, I hate noisy places and I prefer to stay at home instead of going out to a club.
I'm working in an American company,  which requires me to improve my English skills, so I joined this website to find friends who can help me.  Thank you.


환영합니다!

그건대문자로써야주세요.   
단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             
이건더자연스러운이나더일반적인방법을표현합니다.   
맞은구두점과띄어쓰기을사용해주세요.   
제코멘트나 제안입니다.     
낸시4366으로색은열쇠가만들었입니다. 
도움이됐으면좋겠습니다.  

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