TOEFL writing exercises
I'm preparing myself for TOEFL and I have found this simulation writing exercises online: https://www.bestmytest.com/toefl-integrated-writing/1
I reported my answer. I you can correct it I will be very glad. Thanks!
The rapid decline of sea otters is probably caused by pollution. This hypothesis is supported by the fact that other sea mammals are in decline.
However, some experts suggested that could by another environmental explanation: the ocean currents might have created uneven concentrations of pollutants along the coast, but in other locations the otter population seem to be stable.
In opposite of this point of view, the speaker cast sustain the predator factor: orchers prefer to hunt whales but whales are disappear due to human hunters so the orchers started eating more small mammals like otters (or the other species mention in the passage).
The location there are more accessible to orchers are more likely to be hunted. This could explain why in some places the population is stable but not in other.
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TOEFL Writing Exercise
I’m preparing myself for the TOEFL and I found
this writing exercise online.
I wrote my answer below; I would be very grateful if someone would correct it. Thanks!
The rapid decline of sea otters is probably
caused by pollution. This hypothesis is supported by the fact that other sea
mammals are in decline as well. However, some experts suggest that the environment
might be a cause for the decline. They suggest that ocean currents might have
created uneven concentrations of pollutants along the coast, however, in other
locations the otter population seems to be stable.
The other point of view suggests the predator
factor, specifically orcas also called killer whales. orcas prefer to hunt
other whales, but whales are disappearing due to being hunted by humans, so orcas
started eating smaller mammals like otters (or the other species mentioned in
the passage).
The locations that are more accessible to
orcas, are more likely to be hunted. This could explain why in some places the population
is stable, but not in others.
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