Report: free-time facilities for young people
Introduction
The aim of this report is to descrive what free-time facilities for young people there are in the area of Bisceglie and what improvements could be made to give more opportunities to children and adolescents.
Sports facilities
Bisceglie has a wide range of free time facilities for young people, but sport is the most practised by children and adolescents. This is the reason for the presence of 4 little parks, 14 private gym-centers, a public swimming pool, 2 public football fields, a sports hall. Neverthless, all of the parks lack of areas to make gym or have a streatching exercise, so you can go across just to have a simple walk. Furthermore, both the football fields and the sports hall are not accessible to guys who don’t belong to a sport society of the city. The swimming pool is nice and cozy but it can not be used by disable people or for competitive activities.
Other facilities
Cultural facilities are characterised by the presence of a theatre, whch offers specific program and a cultural lab where you can earn degrees in acting, directing, playwriting, dramaturgy, photography and so on. There are two music schools and two theatre private academies, but all the offers are private.
Recommendations
According to all the experts kinds and adolescent must be encouraged to into sports. Il is recommended to find new ways to celebrate sport every month, giving them the possibility to enrich their friend relationships too. The mayor should consider to give them more free opportunities and to make available free public coaches, so offering them some additional possibilities to spend in a good way their free time.
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Report: free-time facilities for young people
IntroductionThe aim of this report is to describe what free-time facilities for young people there are in the area of Bisceglie and what improvements could be made to give more opportunities to children and adolescents.
Sports facilities
Bisceglie has a wide range of free time facilities for young people, but sport is the most practised by children and adolescents. This is the reason for the presence of 4 little parks, 14 private gyms, a public swimming pool, 2 public football fields, and a sports hall. Neverthless, all of the parks lack of areas to make gym or have a streatching exercise, so you can go across just to have a simple walk.(This sentence isn't very clear. I suggest: Nevertheless, all of the parks have areas without gym or stretching facilities, so you can go there just to have a simple walk). Furthermore, both the football fields and the sports hall are not accessible to guys who don’t belong to a sports society of the city. The swimming pool is nice and cozy but it can not be used by disabled people or for competitive activities.
Other facilities
Cultural facilities are characterised by the presence of a theatre, whch offers specific programs and a cultural lab where you can earn degrees in acting, directing, playwriting, dramaturgy, photography and so on. There are two music schools and two private theatre academies, but all the offers are private.
Recommendations
According to all the experts kids and adolescents must be encouraged to get into sports. Il is recommended to find new ways of celebrating sport every month, giving them the chance to enrich their friendships too. The mayor should consider giving them more free opportunities and making available free public coaches, offering them some additional possibilities to spend their free time in a good way.
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