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Hello I made a few foreign friends on the Iralki , We communicate with each other and learn from each other.Yesterday i was very happy , because i first use English to communicate with foreign friend , At that time i was very excited and nervous . Although i can't fully understand what he said , he has been patient with me . i believe i will slowly progress until i can fully understand English, at the same time, i also very grateful to the friend , i will do my best to help him to learn Mandarin. We come together !

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Hello

I have made a few foreign friends on the Italki , We communicate with each other and learn from each other. Yesterday, I was very happy  because I used English for the first time  first use English to communicate with a foreign friend. At that time I was very excited and nervous.  Although I could not  can't fully understand what he said, he has been  was patient with me. I believe I will slowly progress until I can fully understand English. At the same time, I am also very grateful to the my friend  and  I will do my best to help him to learn Mandarin. We can learn come together!

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Hello

I made a few foreign friends on the Italki, We communicate with each other and learn from each other. Yesterday I was very happy, because I first used English to communicate with a foreign friend, At that time I was very excited and nervous. Although I couldn't fully understand what he said , he had been patient with me . I believe I will slowly progress until I can fully understand English. at the same time, I also very grateful to the friend. I will do my best to help him to learn Mandarin. We learn together!


Notes: Very good job! Just a couple things. Remember "I" is always capitalized. Also, run-on sentences should be avoided, and be careful about when to use articles. Keep it up!

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