Stressful Life
- I'm so stressed. How do you think I can remove / get rid of this feeling?
- Violence.
- What? Are you serious? Do you mean I should destroy something to feel good?
- Yes. It's useful.
- (Another friend) Watch a good movie or read a good book and have a good night sleep.
- I'm not sure if that works too.
- Why not go on a cruise?
- I'm broke. Unless you lend me the money needed in such a costly trip.
I want a very informal conversation. Thank you in advance for your help.
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Stressful Life
- I'm so stressed. What can I do / What should I do?- Commit an act of violence.
- What? Are you serious? Do you mean I should destroy something in order to feel better?
- Yes. It's useful.
- (Another friend) Watch a good movie or read a good book and have a good night's sleep.
- I'm not sure if that would work.
- Why not go on a cruise?
- I'm broke. Unless you lend me the money for that ... ?
I want a very informal conversation. Thank you in advance for your help.
I hope this helps!
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Stressful Life
- I'm so stressed. How do you think I can remove / get rid of this feeling? How can I get rid of my stress?- Violence. Do something violent.
- What? Are you serious? You think I should destroy something to feel better?
- Yes. It's useful.
- (Another friend) Watch a good movie or read a good book and have a good night's sleep.
- I'm not sure if that will work. too.
- Why not go on a cruise?
- I'm broke. Unless you lend me the money! needed in such a costly trip.
I want a very informal conversation. Thank you in advance for your help.
Your grammar and word choice are very good, but the corrections that I made make this more informal, like a conversation. Hope that it's helpful!
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