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about mooncakes and the festival My foreign friend once said the package of a mooncake seems so beautiful and delicate,why does he never find anyone ever eat it. I answered actually it is too dry and most of Chinese don't like to eat mooncakes instead of sending to others as a present,it's just a symbol. When people received an exquisite gift contains mooncakes,the next thing they would do is sent it to friends without opening it. So,when it comes to the Mid-autumn Festival. In ancient China,it was a melancholy day if people couldn't back home,they usually admired the beauty of moon and composed poems,it has been thousand years,we can't remember so many poets,but countless excellent poems about moon and nostalgia are often talked and cited. Nowadays,the Festival is not so elegant,the happiest thing I guess is to stay with family and have a dinner,of course,usually no mooncakes. When people feel a sense of nostalgia,they will look up and gaze at the moon,as if they were together with the most important people to them.

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about mooncakes and the festival

My foreign friend once said that mooncake packages  are so beautiful and delicate, why doesn't he never see anyone eating  them? I answered  that they are too dry and most of Chinese don't like to eat mooncakes. Instead, they view them as a symbol and  send them to people as a presents. When people received an exquisite gift containing mooncakes, they don't even open it, but simply   send it to friends.
So, when it comes to the Mid-Aautumn Festival. In ancient China, the Mid-Aautumn Festival it was a melancholy day for those who couldn't make it  back home. So instead (or to console themselves) they admired the beauty of moon and composed poems. ,it has been thousand years,wWe can't remember so many of the poets from the past thousand years, but countless excellent poems about the moon and nostalgia are often talked about and cited.

Nowadays, the Festival is not so very elegant. The happiest thing I guess is to do is to stay be with family and enjoy have a dinner together, of course, usually without no mooncakes.
When people feel a sense of nostalgia, they will look up and gaze at the moon, as thought if they were together with the most important people to them.

This was an interesting read. Be sure to insert a space after commas (and semicolons, when you use them). 

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(1) 看是哪个地方哪家饼店做的月饼,香港四季酒店和半岛酒店的被认为是全世界最好吃的月饼,全球食家都推崇,没有人会拒绝的; (2) 上海、广东和香港地区的人比较喜欢吃月饼。中国很大,省份很多,风俗很不一样,中国人有时也看不清楚中国人是怎样的。
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的确很少
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我一直以为中国人爱吃月饼,原来不是…

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