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Looking for a job I'll be finishing college, in one year. Before finishing college, I have to work in a company for six months. Many of my friends, that are in my same level according to the college's syllabus, are working right now. Last year, I didn't care about jobs. I wasn't interested in learning a script for the job interview or just sending e-mails with my CV to companies. However, it's changed. I'm eager to get a job as soon as possible. I'm going to talk about some reasons that encourage me to look for jobs. To begin with, I'd like to be more independent. When I'll receive my first payment I plan to expend it in some things that I always wanted to have such as buying clothes with my own money, a laptop or PC for studies, good headphones to listen to my favorite band with the best quality sound and taking over of some daily expenses. I also want to take care of my health by going to the doctor in order to treat some problems I already have or to avoid some problems I'll probably have in the future. Then, I want to help my parents with some payments. I don't only want to help my parents out with some expenses, but I want to get used to paying bills to the bank or another place that I'll visit often in the future. Futhermore, I'd like, in a couple of years, to rent an apartment to start fending for myself. Besides, because of some courses I'll be starting a project with a friend and most likely I will need to work on it 24/7 so it'll be better to share the same place with my partner to develop a good project. In my opinion, starting living alone or at least without your parents lets you know how your life might be if you plan to travel to another country. Finally, and most important, I want to apply everything I've known in college so far. I haven't decided in what department I want to focus so I expect once I get familiar to my new job I'll be able to know what areas I like the most. I know that working and studying at the same time is really hard. However, more than money, things or independence I'm eager to work because I'm bored with too much theory we come across in many courses in college.

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Looking for a job

I'll be finishing college, in a year. Before finishing college, I have to work in a company for six months. Many of my friends, that are in my same level according to the college's syllabus, are working right now. Last year, I didn't care about jobs. I wasn't interested in learning a script for the job interview or just sending e-mails with my CV to companies. However, it's changed. I'm eager to get a job as soon as possible. I'm going to talk about some reasons that encourage me to look for jobs.

To begin with, I'd like to be more independent. When I receive my first payment I will plan to expend it in some things that I always wanted to have such as buying clothes with my own money, a laptop or PC for studies, good headphones to listen to my favorite band with the best quality sound and taking over of some daily expenses. I also want to take care of my health by going to the doctor in order to treat some problems I already have or to avoid some problems I'll probably have in the future. Then, I want to help my parents with some payments. I don't only want to help my parents out with some expenses, but I want to get used to paying bills to the bank or another place that I'll visit often in the future. Futhermore, I'd like, in a couple of years, to rent an apartment to start fending for myself. Besides, because of some courses I'll be starting a project with a friend and most likely I will need to work on it 24/7 so it'll be better to share the same place with my partner to develop a good project. In my opinion, starting living alone or at least without your parents lets you know how your life might be if you plan to travel to another country. Finally, and most important, I want to apply everything I've known at college so far. I haven't decided in what department I want to focus so I expect once I get familiar to my new job I'll be able to know what areas I like the most.

I know that working and studying at the same time is really hard. However, more than money, things or independence I'm eager to work because I'm bored with too much theory we come across in many courses at college.
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Looking for a job

I'll be finishing college, in one year. Before finishing college, I have to work in a company for six months. Many of my friends, that are in my same level according to the college's syllabus, are working right now. Last year, I didn't care about jobs. I wasn't interested in learning a script for the job interview or just sending e-mails with my CV to companies. However, it's changed. I'm eager to get a job as soon as possible. I'm going to talk about some reasons that encourage me to look for jobs.

To begin with, I'd like to be more independent. When I I'll receive my first payment I plan to spend it on some things that I've always wanted to have such as buying clothes bought with my own money, a laptop or PC for studies, good headphones to listen to my favorite band with the best quality sound and taking over of some daily expenses. I also want to take care of my health by going to the doctor in order to treat some problems I already have or to avoid some problems I'll probably have in the future. Then, I want to help my parents with some payments. I don't only want to help my parents out with some expenses, but I want to get used to paying bills to the bank or another place that I'll visit often in the future. Furthermore, I'd like, in a couple of years, to rent an apartment to start fending for myself. Besides, because of some courses I'll be starting a project with a friend for some courses and most likely I will need to work on it 24/7 so it'll be better to share the same place with my partner to develop a good project. In my opinion, starting living alone or at least without your parents lets you know how your life might be if you plan to travel to another country. Finally, and most importantly, I want to apply everything I've learned known in college so far. I haven't decided in what department I want to focus so I expect once I get familiar with to my new job I'll be able to know what areas I like the most.

I know that working and studying at the same time is really hard. However, more than money, things or independence I'm eager to work because I'm bored with all the too much theory we come across in many courses in college.
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Looking for a job

I'll be finishing college, in one year. Before finishing college, I have to work in a company for six months. Many of my friends (no comma here) that are in my same level according to the college's syllabus (no comma here) are working right now. Last year, I didn't care about jobs. I wasn't interested in learning a script for the (a) job interview or just sending e-mails with my CV to companies. However, it's changed. I'm eager to get a job as soon as possible. I'm going to talk about some reasons that encourage me to look for jobs.

To begin with, I'd like to be more independent. When I'll receive my first payment(,) I plan to expend (spend) it in some (on) things that I always wanted to have such as buying clothes with my own money, a laptop or PC for studies, good headphones to listen to my favorite band with the best quality sound and taking over of some daily expenses. I also want to take care of my health by going to the doctor in order to treat some problems I already have or to avoid some problems I'll probably have in the future. Then, I want to help my parents with some payments. I don't only want to help my parents out with some expenses, but I want to get used to paying bills to (at) the bank or another place that I'll visit often in the future. Futhermore, I'd like, in a couple of years, to rent an apartment to start fending for myself. Besides, because of some courses I'll be starting a project with a friend and most likely I will need to work on it 24/7 so it'll be better to share the same place with my partner to develop a good project. In my opinion, starting living (to live) alone or at least without your parents lets you know how your life might be if you plan to travel to another country. Finally, and most important, I want to apply everything I've known (learned) in college so far. I haven't decided in what department I want to focus (on) so I expect once I get familiar to my new job I'll be able to know what areas I like the most.

I know that working and studying at the same time is really hard. However, more than money, things or independence(,) I'm eager to work because I'm bored with too much theory we come across in many courses in college.

 

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Eu poderia traduzir este texto, se você quiser saber como ficaria a exposição dos seus objetivos em Português, caso você pretenda algum dia aplicar para o CELPE-BRÁS. Let me know if you desire it.

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