My favorite season is coming

The days are getting longer now. Squirrels, rabbits and any many other animals are comeing out of hibernation. They appear in the park. Many people wore a winter coat just one month ago, but now they wear a T-shirt. It is been beautiful and sunny these days.

I'll leave now this house in this month. I have to clean up my dormitory room, so I clean the room every day little by little.
Today I mopped the all room floor. It is more beautiful than before. I feel a sadness felt sad when I cleaned up it, because I missed will miss this place.
I want to enjoy the rest of my life in here!



Some spelling errors and some tenses. Very well written, and it was easy to understand what you meant. Keep up the great work!

My favorite season is coming

The days are getting longer now. Squirrels, rabbbits and any many other animals are come coming out of hibernation. They appear in the park. Many people were wearing a winter coat just one month ago but now they are wearing a T-shirt. It is been more beautiful and sunny than before.

I'll be leaving now the house in this month. I have to clean up my dormitory room. So I will clean the room every day, little by little.
Today I mopped the all whole room floor. I was feeling a sadness when I cleaned it up it  because I will missed miss this place.
I want would love to enjoy the rest of my life in here!

Well done Asami! Good try! 

You seem to be a little confused with the verb tenses. Try some online verb tense exercises or quizzes maybe that might help you.  

My favorite season is coming

The days are getting longer now. squirrals, rabbbits and any many other animals come out of hibernation. They appear in the park. Many people wear were wearing (past tense) a winter coat just one month ago, but now they wear (present tense. You could also say "are wearing") a T-shirt. It is been beautiful and sunny these days.

I'll leave now the house in this month (now and in are not needed). I have to clean up my dormitory room. So I clean the room every day little by little.
Today I mopped the all  whole (or entire) room floor. It is more beautiful than before. I feel felt (past tense because you use cleaned later) a sadness when I cleaned up it. Because I will missed (future tense) this Place.
I want to enjoy the rest of life in here!