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爱与宇宙塵(作者大卫·琼斯): 这既是福祉, 也是诅咒: 对万事万物 都具有如此深刻感受 Love and Space Dust (by David Jones): It is both a blessing And a curse To feel everything So very deeply.

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爱与宇宙塵(作者大卫·琼斯):

这既是福祉,
也是诅咒:
对万事万物
都具有如此深刻感受

Love and Space Dust (by David Jones):

It is both a blessing
And a curse
To feel everything
So very deeply.


我觉得你的翻译非常棒!

下面这个是我个人的翻译,希望能给你更多启发:

这是福祉,

也是诅咒,

世间万物,

感同身受。


献丑啦~



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爱与宇宙塵(作者大卫·琼斯):

这既是福祉,
也是诅咒:
对万事万物 去感受万事万物
都具有如此深刻感受 那么深入地(this is one type of direct translation,if seeking a better translation we can exchange the two sentences)

Love and Space Dust (by David Jones):

It is both a blessing
And a curse
To feel everything
So very deeply.

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