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Neighborhood Coffee Shop
Usually, I go to the neighborhood coffee shop with my laptop to study by my scooter in the morning on weekends.In the morning on weekends, I usually take my scooter to a neighborhood coffee shop with my laptop to study.
I also enjoy an English newspaper for free there.
However, I could not start an the engine of my scooter on Saturday morning.
So, I walked to another neighborhood coffee shop pretty close to my house.
When I came back home for lunch, I tried to start the engine of the scooter again.
Although I couldn’t start it in a normal approach, I started it by a kicking starting device kicking the starter.
After lunch, I went to a bike shop to check have my scooter checked by a professional person.
He found that the battery of my scooter is was pretty low and too weak to start the engine.
Therefore, I bought a new battery and asked him to exchange it with the old one.
As a result, I went to my favorite regular coffee shop on Sunday morning on my scooter and enjoyed an English newspaper with a cup of coffee. So, I was able to get back to my normal and happy routine make sure the happiness in the usual situation…
That was part of my weekend…hahaha (^_^)
Great job! :-) A couple minor corrections- missing articles for some proper nouns, past tense for story telling and a few different ways to describe how a native speaker would communicate the same information. Good stuff, keep up the good work!
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