A pulsating game
The first half of the game was dull and full of reckless mistakes. During the half-time, the coach reprimanded them for their lacklustre performance. His caustic remarks fired them up, however, and they wrested control of the game from the opponent in the second half. In the end, the game turned out to be pulsating.
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A pulsating game
The first half of the game was dull and full of reckless mistakes. During the half-time, the coach reprimanded them for their lacklustre performance. His caustic remarks fired them up, however, and they( soon) wrested control of the game from their opponents in the second half. In the end, the game turned out to be pulsating.
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Apart from writing wrested instead of wrestled, and the slightly misplaced usage of pulsating, this paragraph is a captivating read.
And even the one or two mistakes that you've made could very easily have been made by a native speaker of the language. Congratulations!
Note: If you do want to use pulsating, a proper application would be something such as, but not limited to this, " In the end, the game turned out to be one pulsating with energy and excitement."
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Aside from maybe pluralizing "opponent", as there would be more than one opponent in the opposing team, this is perfect English. However, I have never heard "pulsating" used to describe a "game". You probably mean "exciting" or "thrilling".
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