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変える散歩しながら自然をたのしむ。 enjoying nature on the walk home: 梅花の枝の上に座った小さな烏をみた。 真っ黒い羽毛と鮮やかな花びらの対比が素敵だった。 I saw a small crow sitting on the branch of a plum blossom tree。 The contrast between it's black feathers and the vibrant petals was beautiful. 家の前に短い尻尾があった変なリサを見た。 怪我をしたかどうかわからなかったけど、なんとかその短い尻尾があったから、可愛くなった。 In front of my house I saw a strange squirrel with a short tail. I don't know if it was injured on not, but somehow the short tail made it look cute.

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家路へと自然を楽しむ (家路の風景)

enjoying nature on the walk home:

梅の花咲く枝の上に一羽の烏をみた。
烏の濡れ羽に梅花が映える。

I saw a small crow sitting on the branch of a plum blossom tree。
The contrast between it's black feathers and the vibrant petals was beautiful.

我家の前に尾の短い一風変わったリスをみた。
怪我をしたかは知らねども、尾の短さが、いと可愛。

In front of my house I saw a strange squirrel with a short tail.
I don't know if it was injured on not, but somehow the short tail made it look cute.

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家まで散歩しながら自然をたのしむ

enjoying nature on the walk home:

梅花の枝の上にとまっている小さな烏をみた。
真っ黒い羽毛と鮮やかな花びらの対比が素敵だった。
I saw a small crow sitting on the branch of a plum blossom tree。
The contrast between it's black feathers and the vibrant petals was beautiful.

家の前で短い尻尾の変な/変わったリスを見た。 (変な might sound a bit disapproving in this case.)
怪我をしているかどうかわからなかったけど、その短い尻尾のために、なぜか可愛らしく見えた。
In front of my house I saw a strange squirrel with a short tail.
I don't know if it was injured on not, but somehow the short tail made it look cute.

 

 

素敵な文章だと思います!

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*帰る散歩! 訂正できなかった >_<

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