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snacks? Should we eat to it ? Snacks are a kind of foods. I consider that you probably have the same thought as me.I like to eat a little bit of biscuits if there are have some in home, even sometimes I just have my meal.Maybe when I am eating snacks I don't fell hungry at this time. I know it doesn;t well like this. Only I cann't control myself. Do you have this kind of experience? So sometimes I realise I shouldn't buy the snacks. If someone wants to control not to eat snacks, he must try his best not to bring them home.Meanwhile the snacks doesn't benifit to our health. I hope we all can resist it together .

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Snacks, should we eat them?

Snacks are a kind of foods, I consider that you probably have the same thought   feelings as me regarding them. I like to eat a few biscuits if there are have some in I have any at home, even sometimes I just have my meal sometimes even after having a meal. Maybe when I am eating snacks I don't fell hungry at this time Maybe I eat snacks when I am hungry.
I know it doesn;t well like this it's not good, but I can't control myself.
Do you have this kind of a similar experience?
So Sometimes I realise (英国人写realise, 美国人写realize) I shouldn't buy the snacks. If someone wants to control not to eat snacks stop eating snacks, he/she/they (要是一个人,可以说they) must try his/her/their best not to bring them home. Meanwhile Also the snacks doesn't don't benifit benefit to our health. I hope we all can resist it them together.

所以可以写:

Snacks, should we eat them?

Snacks are a kind of food, you probably have the same feelings as me regarding them. I like to eat a few biscuits if I have any at home, sometimes even after having a meal. Maybe I eat snacks when I am hungry. I know it's not good but I can't control myself. Do you have a similar experience? Sometimes I realise (我是英国的 :P) I shouldn't buy the snacks. If someone wants to stop eating snacks, they must try their best not to bring them home. Also the snacks don't benefit our health. I hope we all can resist them together.

不错。。。不错。。。要是你有问题,告诉我 :) 



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