No kids zone should have been No irresponsible mothers zone
I have been with a korean debate union in my university. This week’s topic is “No kids zone”. at the first time, I agreed with “No kids zone”, because I saw a lot of mothers who didn’t much care about their kids outside. It can definitely make other people feel uncomfortable. However, as the chairman of this debate put me on the opposite side, I tried to think about the topic in the opposite side. I suddenly realized that, the vital point of this issue is on the mothers who don’t care about their kids outside. When they want to come out, they have to be responsible for the behavior which is to come out with children. Cause, nobody forces them to come out. Thus, if they are not responsible for their behavior, they have to be blamed and punished. So I think, No kids zone should have been “No irresponsible mothers zone”. the issue’s object should have been irresponsible mothers zone.
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"No kids zone" should have been "No irresponsible mothers" zone
I have been with a Korean debate society in my university. This week’s topic is “No kids zone”. At first, I agreed with the “No kids zone” idea, because I've seen a lot of mothers who didn’t care much about their kids in public. It can definitely make other people feel uncomfortable. However, as the chairman of this debate put me on the opposite team, I tried to think about the topic from the opposite perspective. I suddenly realized that, the vital point of this issue is on the mothers who don’t care about their kids in public. When they go out with their children, they have to be responsible for their behavior which is to come out with children. Cause Nobody forces them to come out. Thus, if they are not responsible for their children's behavior, they should be blamed and punished. So I think the focus of the debate should have been “No irresponsible mothers zone” instead of "no kids zone."Interesting. Personally, I think there should be more play areas for kids at places like shopping centers.
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