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Poor children in china Recently, I hear from my aunt that my poor little cousin has to stay in his teachers home until 9pm. It must be boring and unbearable under the supervision of your own teachers. Children are supposed to enjoy their childhood with giggling with friends and wandering around some interesting place. They are not study machines. Instead, they have to play to understand, explore and adjust to the society eventually. If we force they to study a lot, they will lose the interest to learn in the future. My poor little cousin.

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Poor children in China

Recently, I heard from my aunt that my poor little cousin has to stay in his teacher's home until 9pm. It must be boring and unbearable under the supervision of his teachers. Children are supposed to enjoy their childhood, giggling with friends and wandering around some interesting place. They are not study-machines. Instead, they have to play to understand, explore and adjust to the society eventually. If we force them to study a lot, they will lose the interest to learn in the future.
My poor little cousin.


If I would have written this, I might have phrased it this way: 

Poor children in China... 

Recently, my aunt told me that my poor little cousin has to say at his teacher's home until 9pm. It must be terribly boring, and quite unbearable to remain under the supervision of his teachers. Children should be free to enjoy their childhood. Spending their time giggling with friends, and wandering around in interesting places. They are not study-machines, and should be given time to play, understand, explore, and adjust to society gradually. If we force them to constantly study, they may lose their interest in learning. 

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