The City Beautiful Movement
Due to a great movement of rural citizens and the lack of comprehensive urban planning, metropolitan centers in the U.S. experienced several problems. In order to solve those, a city plan called the City Beautiful Movement was introduced in the exposition in Chicago. Numerous people were excited about its possibility, and Washington D.C. became a subsequent target for the city plan. The plan for Washington D.C. was designed by Pierre L'Enfant, but only some aspects of his plan were actually carried out. Consequently, the city faced same problems, so the urban plan was conducted again with its main focus on the mall. On the other hand, after the Great Chicago Fire, Chicago underwent the city plan for itself. The major points of the plan were to develop green spaces and efficient street systems. Although the opponents constantly indicated its disregard for the lower classes, the City Beautiful Movement's influence still remains until now.
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The City Beautiful Movement
Due to a great movement of rural citizens and the lack of comprehensive urban planning, metropolitan centers in the U.S. experienced several problems. In order to address these problems, a city plan called the "City Beautiful Movement" was introduced at the exposition in Chicago. Numerous people were excited about its possibility the possible benefits of the plan, and Washington D.C. became a subsequent target for the plan. The plan for Washington D.C. was designed by Pierre L'Enfant, but only some aspects of his plan were actually carried out. Consequently, the city still faced the same problems, so the urban plan was conducted again, with its main focus but focusing mainly on The Mall. On the other hand, And after the Great Chicago Fire, Chicago underwent the city plan for itself. The major points of the plan were to develop green spaces and an efficient street system. Although the opponents of the plan constantly indicated (pointed out/ disparaged) its disregard for the lower classes, the City Beautiful Movement's influence can still be seen today remains until now.Good work, if you have questions please let me know.
1. It is best to start a summary with the date.
2. We need to know what the problems were.
"Due to the urbanization and lack of comprehensive urban planning in the _______, Metropolitan areas in the U.S experienced problems with ________________, _______________, and ___________."
3. What "exposition" is it? I don't know what "The Exposition" is.
4. "can still be seen today" is a set phrase that is very common.
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