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Should women be allowed to breastfeed in public? spaces?
Breasts are just breasts. It's They are a body parts which is are designed to feed babies in nature. You should stop seeing women's bodies only from a by sexual perspective. Many people tend to stare at nursing babies in public places space and think it's a disgusting and inappropriate behavior. If women are not allowed to breastfeed in public space, their rights to go out with their babies have been taken away. So it's a discrimination against mothers.
1. "Breasts are": Here it is correct. You use the plural form. But the next sentence you say, "It is." It should be "They were"
2. "going out with their baby" is one right. So it should be singular. "If women are not allowed to breastfeed in public, it (restricts/ removes/ takes away) their right to go out with their baby."
Should women be allowed to breastfeed in public space?
Breasts are just breasts. It's a body part which is designed to feed babies in nature.You should stop seeing women's body only by sexual perspective. Many people tend to stare at nursing babies in public space and think it's a disgusting and inappropriate behavior. If women are not allowed to breastfeed in public space, their rights to go out with their babies has been taken away. So it's a discrimination against mothers.======================================================================================================
Breasts are breasts. It is a body part naturally designed for feeding babies. One should stop viewing the female body only from a sexual perspective. Many people tend to stare at and think that nursing babies publicly is disgusting and inappropriate. However, if women are not allowed to breastfeed in public, their rights to go out with their babies will be taken away. As such, it is a discrimination against mothers.
Should women be allowed to breastfeed in public space?
Breasts are just breasts. It's a body part which was designed to feed babies in nature(in nature means it's done in the nature and not naturally).You should stop seeing women's body only by(by is used before stating the person who does the action) from a sexual perspective. Many people tend to stare at nursing babies in public space and think it's a disgusting and inappropriate behavior. If women are not allowed to breastfeed in public space, their rights to go out with their babies has will have been(future perfect tense- don't let it bother you just yet) taken away. So(the word so is used to connect parts of a sentence, and so it can't be used at the beginning of a sentence) Therefore it's a discrimination against mothers.Want to progress faster?
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