A holiday in a seaside town
Hi, Josh!
I'm on an amazing holiday in Acapulco! I'm really enjoying it! I'm staying in a great hotel, where we always have a delicious breakfast. In the evenings, we usually go out for a walk along the beach. I’ll be back soon!
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A holiday in a seaside town
Hi, Josh!I'm on an amazing holiday in Acapulco! I'm really enjoying it! I'm staying in a great hotel, where we always have a delicious breakfast. In the evenings, we usually go out for a walk along the beach. I’ll be back soon!
Hey Luiz, great work, it's very accurate. I would only change one line. "where we always have a delicious breakfast". It doesn't sound very natural to me. Others might disagree, but I would write something like "where they always serve a delicious breakfast". There are probably many ways to write it. My native brain just said that your sentence could be improved. But great work.
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