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The way to my first car! Hi mates! Today I'm planning to go to traffic department, which is located near yo my home, to get more information about the procedures of obtaining a driving licence. Actually I don't own a car currently, but I'm planing to buy one in the few coming months. Also I didn't learn driving before, so that I'll seek today for any good driving school to join and start my lessons. I hope to be a clever student and to learn quickly, so I can pass soonest periodical driving exam to get my licence as soon as possible. Wish me good luck! Bye :)

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The way to my first car!

Hi mates!

Today I'm planning to go to traffic department, which is located near to my home, to get more information about the procedures of for obtaining a driving licence.

Actually, I don't own a car currently, but I'm planing to buy one in the few coming months.
Also, I've didn't learnt driving before, so that I'll seek look  for any good driving school today to join and start my lessons.

I hope to be a clever student and to learn quickly, so I can  pass soonest periodical the driving exam to get my licence as soon as possible.

Wish me good luck!
Bye :)



Good luck with it :)

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The way to my first car!

Hi mates!

Today I am planning to go to the department of traffic which is near my house in order get the information on how to obtain a driving licence.

Even though currently, I don't have a car I am planning to buy one within few months. I have no driving experience. Therefore, today  I am also searching and hope to find a good driving school.

I hope I will be a quick learner by being able to grasp all the driving lessons. Which will then help me to pass the driving exam and get my licence soon.

Wish me good luck!
Bye :)
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The way to my first car!

Hi, mates!

Today I'm planning to go to the traffic department near my home to get more information about the driving license process.

(your original sentence was way too long) 


Currently,I don't own a car, but I'm planing to buy one in the next few months.
I didn't learn how to drive yet, so I'll look for a good driving school to take my lessons at. 

I hope to be a clever student and learn quickly so that  I can pass the driving exam and be driving as soon as possible.  


(Slang lesson- we say: I want to pass the driving test on the first try so i can hit the road ASAP. (pronounced A SAP)

We don't say driving exam- we say driving test in America.  The exam refers to the actual written test but we almost always call it test either the physical driving test or the written test. )

Wish me good luck!
Bye :)

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The way to my first car!

Hi mates!

Today I'm planning to go to the traffic department, which is located near yo my home, to get more information about the procedures for obtaining a driving licence.

Actually I don't currently own a car , but I'm planning to buy one in the next few coming months.
Also I haven't learned to drive yet didn't learn driving before, so that I'll seek today I'll look for any good driving school to join and start my lessons.

I hope to be a clever student and to learn quickly, so I can quickly pass soonest periodical the driving exam to and get my licence as soon as possible.

Wish me good luck!
Bye :)
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