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today, i want to talk about a moat in my childhood The place I’d like to show you is a city moat in my native place and also near the place where I lived. When I was a little child, I liked playing in there very much. Every day, from morning to evening, there are always many people, elders and children like me, chatting and playing with each other. Elders often played go, an ancient Chinese game which needs a peaceful mind and a plain soul, with each other. Like the peaceful moat. Never like the competition between the human and Alphago. This landscape composed by willows, people and wind is breathtaking, with fishes swimming in the moat, the stones in the water bottom were all clear and even reflecting a variety of color of sunshine, and I can never forget this situation. I prefer enjoying the sunshine in the garden and lying down in the grass near the moat with my friends, who were also my neighbors. We always raced electric car through the moat bank and sometimes we may have a gun battle game together. There had no computer and no electric games and no mobile phone with lots of Smartphone Addicts and the memory it there is always the most important part in my little child’s brain. Childhood, besides the time in the class, passed away silently in the city just like the moat or we can call it a creek, peacefully and carefree.

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Memory such as this, it there is always the most important part memorable in my little child’s mind of yore.  brain. My childhood, besides the time spent in the class, passed away flow silently in the city just like the moat or (which we can call it a creek), peacefully and carefree.


Very nice imagery.

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This willow landscape composed by willows, along with its denizens people and wind is breathtaking. The breeze is refreshing  with and the fishes swimming lazily in the moat. the stones in The moat water is crystal clear; bottom were all clear and even every pebble and stone reflecting in their a variety of colors in the of sunshine.  Never can and I can never forget this scenery situation.

I prefer enjoying the sunshine in the garden by the moat.  and lying I like to lie down on the grass near the moat with my neighbor friends. who were also my neighbors. We always raced with each other in the electric cars through on the moat bank and sometimes we may have a mock gun battle with each other game together. Then, there were had no computer; and no electronic games and no mobile phone nor  with lots of Smartphone addicts to mar the tranquility of the place.  and the 

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today, i want to talk about A Moat in of My Childhood

The place I’d would like to introduce show you You have no photo or picture to show us. is a city moat.  A city moat in my hometown native place and also near the place where I still lived. When I was a little child, I liked to playing in there very much.
Every Each day;  from morning to evening.  There are always many people, especially the elderly and children like me.   The adults chatter ing away and while the children played with each other. 你這样写法是老少在一起談話或者在玩耍. Often the elderly Elders often plays Weichi Go is the Japanese term Go, an ancient Chinese game which requires a peace of mind and a calm spirit to concentrate -- needs a peaceful mind and a plain soul, with each other. Like Just like the peacefulness of the moat. Never like the Unlike the intense competition between the human man and the computer program, Alphago.
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today, i want to talk about a moat in my childhood

The place I’d like to show you is a city moat in my native place and also near the place where I lived. When I was a little child, I liked playing in there very much.
Every day, from morning to evening, there are always many people, elders and children like me, chatting and playing with each other. Elders often played go, an ancient Chinese game which needs a peaceful mind and a plain soul, with each other. Like the peaceful moat. Never like the competition between the human and Alphago.
This landscape composed by willows, people and wind is breathtaking, with fishes swimming in the moat, the stones in the water bottom were all clear and even reflecting a variety of color of sunshine, and I can never forget this situation.

I prefer enjoying the sunshine in the garden and lying down in the grass near the moat with my friends, who were also my neighbors. We always raced electric cars through the moat bank and sometimes we may have had a gun battle game together. There had were no computers, no electric games, and no mobile phone with lots of Smartphone Addicts and this memory of there is always the most important part in my little child’s brain mind. Childhood, besides the time spent in the class, passed away silently in the city just like the moat or we can call it a creek, peacefully and carefree.

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