Monday I skied last week with my friend, we drunk and ate a lot , we had great fun. We was at Corvara in the centre of Dolomiti . The weather was very nice, there was a shine and was very hot , it

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Monday I skied last week with my friend, we drunk and ate a lot , we had great fun. We was at Corvara in the centre of Dolomiti . The weather was very nice, there was a shine and was very hot , it has been a good week. Thanks a lot for correction

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I skied last week with my friend, we drunk and ate a lot , we had great fun.

I went skiing last with with my friend. We drank and ate a lot, and overall had fun.

We was at Corvara in the centre of Dolomiti .
We were in Corvara, which is a municipality located at the centre of Dolomiti.

The weather was very nice, there was a shine and was very hot , it has been a good week.
The weather was very nice. There was a lot of sunshine, and it was very hot. It has been a good week.
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This is another way you could have described your week:

Last week, I went skiing with my friend in Corvara. There was ample sunshine, and the weather was pleasant throughout the week. We ate and drank a lot, and overall, had a lot of fun.

Monday

I skied last week with my friend (Last week, I skied with my friend / I skied with my friend last week), we drunk and ate a lot , we had great fun.

We was (were) at Corvara in the centre of Dolomiti .

The weather was very nice, there was a shine (the sun was shining / or "it was sunny") and was very hot , it has been a good week.

Thanks a lot for correction

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