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I'm an engineer Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki and this is the first time I'm write a notebook. I'm gratuaning on Monday so this week I had a party all days. In this period I'm going to improve my English. Good week end guys✌

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I'm an engineer

Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki and this is the first time I'm write a notebook. I'm gratuaning on Monday so this week I had a party all days. In this period I'm going to improve my English. Good week end guys✌


Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki and this is my first notebook entry. On Monday I will be graduating, so this week I will be partying everyday( or having a party everyday)! During  this period I'm going to improve my English. have a good week end guys.

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Congratssss!!! I know how engineering is a difficult course =\, I am a production engineering student .Finally, I am in my last year of university, so next year I will be getting my degree. I can't wait! Also, I want improve my English =D
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Your original sentence:

Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki, and this is the first time I'm write a notebook.

Here are some possible revisions:
Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki, and this is the first time I'm writing a notebook entry.
Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki, and this is the first time I'm writing in my notebook.
Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki, and this is my first notebook entry.

Your original sentence:
I'm gratuaning on Monday, so this week I had a party all days. 

Here are some possible revisions:
I'm graduating on Monday, so I'm partying all week.
I'm graduating on Monday, so I'm partying every day this week. 
I'm graduating on Monday, so there is a party each day this week.
I'm graduating on Monday, so this week, I'm partying every day.
I'm graduating on Monday, so this week there is a party every day.

An important thing to note is the difference between every day and everyday. Every day means "each day." Everyday means "common."
Examples:
I walk my dog every day.
Plain bread is an everyday meal in the life of a peasant. 

Your original sentence:
In this period, I'm going to improve my English. Good week end guys✌

Here are some possible revisions:
I'm going to improve my English in this period of time. Have a good weekend, guys!
I'm going to use this spare time to improve my English. Have a good weekend, guys!
During this period, I will work on improving my English. Have a good weekend, guys!
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I'm an engineer

Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki and this is the first time I'm writing a notebook. I'm graduating on Monday so [(this week I had a party every day) or (one day this past week I had a party all day), depending one what you meant]. In this period of time I'm going to improve my English. Have a good weekend guys✌

I am also an engineer. Congratulations on graduating! ^_^
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I'm an engineer

Hi, I'm an Italian engineer. I'm a new user on italki and this is the first time I'm I've writen a notebook. I'm graduating on Monday so this week I had a parties all every days. In this period I'm going to improve my English. Good week end guys✌

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