Father’s Day
Hi all, this morning in Italy is the Father’s Day and my son, just I woke up, told me a poem... that's for me a greatest gift by my son! I love my little son and I hope for him much of healty and lucky!
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First of all, congratulations!
Father’s Day
Hi all,This morning in Italy is the Father’s Day and my son, just I woke up? who just woke up/whom I just woke up?, told me a poem... that's for me a greatest gift by my son! That is the greatest gift for me from my son.I love my little son and I hope for WISH him much of healtHy and lucky!
I kept your original ideas as much as possible but the last sentence would sound more natural rephrased like this:
I love my little son and I wish him lots of health and luck in life.
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I love my little son and I hope he`ll be very healthy and lucky in life.
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