A classmate's birthday
今天,我的一个女同学过生日,买了5个蛋糕,叫我们过去吃。我本来是不知道这事的,因为她是在课堂上邀请我们的,而我今天一整天没去上课。朋友打电话来的时候,我刚好吃完晚饭,加上还有作业要做所以不想去,但是她说蛋糕吃不完,于是一定要我去。来到party的地方,已经很多人在聊天了,我和舍友很自然地加入了他们。我很久没有参加聚会了,平时一个人吃饭,也很少跟身边人聊天,今天因为这个生日会,得以跟身边人沟通,感觉也挺好。短短半个小时,我们聊了好多,发现身边同学发生了好多事,而我不知道。哪个老师相亲成功了,谁谁有人追了,谁得了病回家休息了等等。突然发现自己现在的生活好少和人交流,都不知道自己同学怎么样了,有点伤神。
Today, a girl in my class bought five cakes to celebrate her birthday and invited us to eat. I didn't know it until the party began because she gave her invitation in class when i was not there. Actually, i haven't went to class all of the day. So, when they called me, i was just done eating, and addly, i even had homework to do so i said that i woundn't go. But, she, my friend, did give up, said there are too much cake to eat that we must go to help them. I knew that she just wanted wo can join in them, so my roommates and i went to the party. When we arrived, it was already very noisy there and we jioned them naturally. I haven't played on party for a long time and i always eat lonely so i hardly have chance to chat with my classmates. Now,I felt good that i can play with them on the party. We chated so much in just half an hour. For example, A teacher who made his success on a blind date; A girl who had a boy to pursue her and a girl got sick, taking a rest at home. Suddenly, i feel a little sad because i was busy these days and didn't know many things happened on my friends near me.
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A classmate's birthday
Today, a girl in my class bought five cakes to celebrate her birthday and invited us to eat. I didn't know about it until the party began because she gave her invitation in class when i was not there. Actually, i had not gone to class all of the day. So, when they called me, i had just finished eating, and addly, i even had homework to do, so i said that i woundn't go. But, she, my friend, did not give up. She said there was too much cake to eat and that we must go to help them. I knew that she just wanted us to can join in them, so my roommates and i went to the party. When we arrived, it was already very noisy, there and we joined them naturally. I hadn't been to a party for a long time. and i always eat alone, so i hardly have the/a chance to chat with my classmates. Now I'm glad that I went to the party. We chatted so much in just half an hour. For example, we talked about a teacher who had a great blind date, a girl who had a boy to pursue her(,) and a girl who got sick and took a rest at home. Suddenly, i felt a little sad because i was busy these days and didn't know many of the things that happened to my friends near me.0
OK,I already know the "i" has to write "I" all the time. o(^▽^)o。。。。。
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