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A classmate's birthday 今天,我的一个女同学过生日,买了5个蛋糕,叫我们过去吃。我本来是不知道这事的,因为她是在课堂上邀请我们的,而我今天一整天没去上课。朋友打电话来的时候,我刚好吃完晚饭,加上还有作业要做所以不想去,但是她说蛋糕吃不完,于是一定要我去。来到party的地方,已经很多人在聊天了,我和舍友很自然地加入了他们。我很久没有参加聚会了,平时一个人吃饭,也很少跟身边人聊天,今天因为这个生日会,得以跟身边人沟通,感觉也挺好。短短半个小时,我们聊了好多,发现身边同学发生了好多事,而我不知道。哪个老师相亲成功了,谁谁有人追了,谁得了病回家休息了等等。突然发现自己现在的生活好少和人交流,都不知道自己同学怎么样了,有点伤神。 Today, a girl in my class bought five cakes to celebrate her birthday and invited us to eat. I didn't know it until the party began because she gave her invitation in class when i was not there. Actually, i haven't went to class all of the day. So, when they called me, i was just done eating, and addly, i even had homework to do so i said that i woundn't go. But, she, my friend, did give up, said there are too much cake to eat that we must go to help them. I knew that she just wanted wo can join in them, so my roommates and i went to the party. When we arrived, it was already very noisy there and we jioned them naturally. I haven't played on party for a long time and i always eat lonely so i hardly have chance to chat with my classmates. Now,I felt good that i can play with them on the party. We chated so much in just half an hour. For example, A teacher who made his success on a blind date; A girl who had a boy to pursue her and a girl got sick, taking a rest at home. Suddenly, i feel a little sad because i was busy these days and didn't know many things happened on my friends near me.

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A classmate's birthday

Today, a girl in my class bought five cakes to celebrate her birthday and invited us to eat. I didn't know about it until the party began because she gave her invitation in class when i was not there. Actually, i had not gone to class all of the day. So, when they called me, i had just finished eating, and addly, i even had homework to do, so i said that i woundn't go. But, she, my friend, did not give up. She said there was too much cake to eat and that we must go to help them. I knew that she just wanted us to can join in them, so my roommates and i went to the party. When we arrived, it was already very noisy, there and we joined them naturally. I hadn't been to a party for a long time. and i always eat alone, so i hardly have the/a chance to chat with my classmates. Now I'm glad that I went to the party. We chatted so much in just half an hour. For example, we talked about a teacher who had a great blind date, a girl who had a boy to pursue her(,) and a girl who got sick and took a rest at home. Suddenly, i felt a little sad because i was busy these days and didn't know many of the things that happened to my friends near me.
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OK,I already know the "i" has to write "I" all the time. o(^▽^)o。。。。。

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