A big problem for travelers. Hello everybody! Today I want to write about a big problem that we have the travelers. I will be on Europe for 28 days (my first time), and I must to define the places to

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A big problem for travelers. Hello everybody! Today I want to write about a big problem that we have the travelers. I will be on Europe for 28 days (my first time), and I must to define the places to visit. It is very complicated coordinate the multiple factors involved: time, preferences, money, kids (in my case). Furthermore, just 2 months left for the travel. The point is that I don't want that these 2 months to become in a stress time, on the contrary, I want to follow enjoying this fabulous experience and put aside this problem. For this reason, I am on relax time and I have a preliminar circuit (North Italy, Croatia coast, Paris, Switzerland), but always open to add other places on the road, so I must be look out to changes that can arise. One thing is sure: as time goes, the anxiety begins to grow!

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A big problem for travelers.

Hello everybody!
Today I want to write about a big problem that we have as travelers. I will be in Europe for 28 days (my first time), and I need to define (better: figure out) which places to visit. It is very complicated to coordinate the multiple factors involved: time, preferences, money, and kids (in my case) with just 2 months left before we leave. The point is that I don't want that these 2 months to become in a stressful time; on the contrary, I want to follow enjoy this fabulous experience and put aside these problem. For this reason, I am on a relaxed schedule and I have a preliminary tour (Northern Italy, the Croatian coast, Paris, Switzerland), but I'm always open to adding other places on the road, so I must be on the lookout for changes that may arise. One thing is sure: as time goes, the anxiety begins to grow!

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Well done!

Compare: I need to = tengo que / I must = debo

Bon voyage!

A big problem for travelers.

Hello everybody!
Today I want to write about a big problem that we have the travelers have. I will be in Europe for 28 days. This is my first time. I must to define/decide the places I want to visit. It is very complicated/difficult coordinating the multiple factors involved: time, preferences, money, kids (in my case). Furthermore, just I only have 2 months left for scheduling the travel. The point is that I don't want that these 2 months to become in a stressful time. On the contrary, I want to follow continue enjoying this fabulous experience and put aside this problem. For this reason, I am on relax time. I already have a preliminary circuit (North Italy, Croatian coast, Paris, Switzerland), but I'm always open to add other places on down the road. So I must be on the lookout to for changes that can arise. One thing is sure: as time goes by, the anxiety begins to grow!

A big problem for travelers.

Hello everybody!
Today I want to write about a big problem that we have the travelers. I will be on Europe for 28 days (my first time), and I must to define the places to visit. It is very complicated coordinate the multiple factors involved: time, preferences, money, kids (in my case). Furthermore, just 2 months left for the travel. The point is that I don't want that these 2 months to become in a stress time, on the contrary, I want to follow enjoying this fabulous experience and put aside this problem. For this reason, I am on relax time and I have a preliminar circuit (North Italy, Croatia coast, Paris, Switzerland), but always open to add other places on the road, so I must be look out to changes that can arise. One thing is sure: as time goes, the anxiety begins to grow!

An ISSUE for Travellers.

Hello everybody!

Today, I want to write about an ISSUE I HAVE REGARDING AN UPCOMING TRIP TO EUROPE. I will be IN Europe for 28 days (my first time) AND HAVE FOUND IT DIFFICULT TO coordinate THE TRIP WITH multiple factors involved e.g time, preferences, money, kids (in my case). WE HAVE TWO MONTHS UNTIL WE TRAVEL AND I dont want these TO BE STRESSFUL, on the contrary, I WANT TO PUT THIS ISSUE TO ONE SIDE AND LOOK FORWARD TO THIS fabulous experience. I HAVE THEREFORE DECIDED TO SCHEDULE PLACES TO VISIT AND AS A RESULT I am MORE relaxed ABOUT OUR UPCOMING TRIP. OUR SCHEDULE will involve visits to Northern Italy, THE Croation Coast, Paris and Switzerland, although I am always open to NEW PLACES TO VISIT AS WE TRAVEL. One thing is FOR sure THOUGH, as time goes by, I WILL BECOME MORE ANXIOUS.

I have changed the structure but dont worry as your original text is very easy to read and you get across what you want to say without any problem. Your English is very good and this is simply something to compare with what you wrote.

e.g. means: for example (por ejemplo) and allows you to list as many examples as you like.

I have done this from the perspective of a person from England as it can sometimes differ slightly from other english speaking nations.

Hope this helps!

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