Kim's notebook entry: changes

Today's China cannot be is not the same as it used to be past few decadesgo. The Dramatic changes has have immersed in enveloped the country's growth, even in tiny details. Some changes that have emerged are unimaginable you can’t image before ,but it shows itself .

When I was young , we don’t didn't have much money to buy the clothes and school bags from the shop. even I didn’t have a chance to visit the stores in my county -- it seemed too luxurious for us. My mother bought the low-cost material from the market and made them clothes with hers Sartorius (?). My sister and I would dress the same: the same material, same color, same style cloth. But now,you can see different kinds of clothes in the big malls and fashion shows from on TV, colorful and of good quality. People have more choices now and everyone won’t no one likes to wear the same as others.

How What about the house condition of housing? I won’t take the example of the big city, like Beijing , Shanghai or Shenzhen, but in my hometown, in a small country, I can see the big changes every year when I go home for Spring Festival. Now, most of the villagers have their own double floors two-story house and with advanced household appliances, such as a telephone, color TV set, refrigeratory, even a personal computer. Compared with a few decades ago, only having a black and white TV set, contacting relation with communicating by letter: this is are really great progress for us .

How about me ? I will talk more about that next time.


Very good! I like how you wrote very boldly in the first paragraph. Some things were expressed a little awkwardly, but you should keep trying. Also, remember the importance of tense in European languages. When you're talking about the past, it's very important to change the verb. 加油！