Da Lat - Romantic city
If I was asked for an impressive place I had visited, I'll describe Da Lat - the most dreamy city of Viet Nam. First, Da Lat has its own special atmosphere which is not too hot or not too cold. The temperatures are pleasantly warm by day, and quite cool at night, down to perhaps 10 degrees Celsius . Second , there are lots of beautiful famous sceneries in Da Lat. Moreover, nerver in this place I catch a storm , which make it favorable for me to take any daytime leisure walk. Third, maybe Da Lat will not be a dreamy city as it means if many flowers isn't been mentioned. When I arrived there, I was impressed by many different beautiful flowers which spreads along many streets of this city. For all the reason above , Da Lat is really a romantic city. For sure, I can say that : ' If you are in love, a week in Da Lat - a rhythmic land of flowers and romance- will make your love into happy ending''.
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Da Lat - Romantic city
If I was asked for an impressive place I had visited, I'll describe Da Lat - the most dreamy city of Viet Nam.If I was asked about an impressive place that I've been to, I would say Da Lat - the most dreamy city in Viet Nam.
[ comments: I think your sentence is grammatically correct, but it sounds unnatural, what I've written is how I would have said it if that helps. I really had to think about this one - very hard! ]
Firstly, Da Lat has its own special atmosphere which is not too hot or not too cold. good
The temperatures are pleasantly warm by day, and quite cool at night, down to perhaps 10 degrees Celsius.
The temperature is pleasantly warm by day and quite cool at night, perhaps coming down to 10 degrees Celsius.
Second, there are lots of beautiful famous sceneries in Da Lat.
Secondly, there are lots of beautiful and famous scenery in Da Lat.
Moreover, nerver in this place I catch a storm, which make it favorable for me to take any daytime leisure walk.
Moreover, there are never any storms here, which is great for me as I can go for leisure walks during the day.
Third, maybe Da Lat will not be a dreamy city as it means if many flowers isn't been mentioned.
Thirdly, how can Da Lat be a dreamy city if I don't make mention of the flowers?
When I arrived there, I was impressed by many different beautiful flowers which spreads along many streets of this city.
When I arrived there, I was impressed by the many different and beautiful flowers which cover the city streets.
For all the reason above, Da Lat is really a romantic city.
For all the reasons above, Da Lat is a really romantic city to me.
For sure, I can say that: 'If you are in love, a week in Da Lat - a rhythmic land of flowers and romance- will make your love into happy ending''.
Therefore, I can say that "if you are in love, a week in Da Lat - the rhythmic* land of flowers and romance - will definitely bring a happy outcome to your love."
*I don't really understand what you're trying to convey using "rhythmic" here.
Overall, I think your writing is very good. What is more impressive is you have a very poetic way of writing, it's quite lovely.
That took a really long time haha, I hope it helped - good luck!
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Da Lat - Romantic City
If I was asked for (to write) about an impressive place I had have visited, so I'll describe Da Lat - the most dreamy city of/in Viet Nam. First, Da Lat has its own special climate/atmosphere, which is not too hot or not too cold/neither too hot nor too cold. The temperatures are is pleasantly warm by day, and quite cool at night, down to perhaps 10 degrees Celsius . Second , there are lots of beautiful famous sceneryies in Da Lat. Moreover, nerver in this place I never get caught by/catch a storm , which makes it favorable/attractive for me to take any a daytime leisure walk. Third, maybe Da Lat will would not be a dreamy city as it means if the many flowers isn't were not been mentioned. When I arrived there, I was impressed by how many different beautiful flowers which are spreads along many streets of this city. For all the reasons above , Da Lat is really a romantic city. For sure, I can say that : " If you are in love, a week in Da Lat - a rhythmic land of flowers and romance- will make/give your love into a happy ending''.Want to progress faster?
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