Translated Chinese composition into English. Does it look awkward? ^^
On Friday my mother bought two small chicks by the school gates.
They are yellow from head to foot and also are very cute. That’s why I called them: Cutie and Yellow Egg. They look like two fluffy balls, very cute. They have two black like black beads eyes.
Their beaks are pink and sharp. There are four toes on their feet.
When they are hungry they say: “Cheep! Cheep! We are hungry, faster give us some food!”
Once I decided to colour my chicks. On the body of Yellow Egg I painted very big white egg, it was so cute. For Cutie I prepared a princess dress and a princess crown. Then I put it on Cutie. When they saw each other they were very surprised. They didn’t recognize each other.
They two are very playful and very cute. I hope they will grow up very fast!
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Translated Chinese composition into English. Does it look awkward? ^^
On Friday my mother bought two small chicks by the school gates.They are yellow from head to foot and also are very cute. That’s why I called them: Cutie and Yellow Egg. They look like two fluffy balls, very cute. They have eyes like black beads.
Their beaks are pink and sharp. There are four toes on their feet.
When they are hungry they say: “Cheep! Cheep! We are hungry, give us some food, faster!”
Once I decided to colour my chicks. On the body of Yellow Egg I painted a very big white egg, it was so cute. For Cutie I prepared a princess dress and a princess crown. Then I put it on Cutie. When they saw each other they were very surprised. They didn’t recognize each other.
They are both very playful and very cute. I hope they will grow up very fast!
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