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Thanks for your reading My name is Julia Zhou, I come from China, I'm eager to improve my English, wish somebody could help me, and I also like to help others to learn Chinese language. I like reading. at the moment, I am reading a book named 'the kite runner' which is a wonderful book.

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Thanks for your reading

My name is Julia Zhou. I come from Chin. I'm eager to improve my English and I wish somebody could help me, and I also like to help others to learn Chinese language.

I like reading. at the moment, I am reading a book named 'the kite runner' which is  wonderful. 

NOTE: -  Use dots instead of commas when you want to end a sentence

-  I am reading a book named 'the kite runner' which is  a wonderful book.: You  used a lot words " book",


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Thanks for your reading this.

My name is Julia Zhou, I'm come from China. I'm eager to improve my English. I wish somebody could help me, and I could also like to help you others to learn Chinese language.

I like reading. at the moment At the moment I like to read. I am reading a book called named "The Kite Runner" which is a wonderful book.


Great job! I'm sure you'll improve your English in no time! 

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Thanks for your reading

My name is Julia Zhou, I come from China, I'm eager to improve my English,I wish somebody could would help me, and I would also like to help others to learn Chinese language.

I like reading. , at the moment, I am reading a book named 'The Kite Runner' which is a wonderful book.


Very good !  Just minor corrections.

"would"is better in 2nd paragraph -- could =be able to.  So almost all native English speakers are able to help.

would= be willing to, or actually help.  So only some native speakers have the time or interest to help.

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thank you very much， Khet！
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I will love to help you in improving you English. I am available to teach you English.

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