A bad mouse
A mouse has appeared in my house for 4 days. There is nothing to say if it doesn't eat a lot of my favorite foods and make a mess every night. It made my most interesting comic torn. That mouse even destroyed a cooker. Yesternight, when waking up to drink some water, I found it eating bananas. Because my father was working on a night shift at that time, my mother, my younger sister and I had to catch it ourselves. This was the first time I had seen such an aggressive mouse in my house so I was so scared that I let it go. My mother said that next time we would successfully catch it. It's really a bad mouse. Why could it bite my comic book? I hate it!
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A bad mouse
A mouse has appeared in my house for 4 days now. There is nothing to say if it doesn't eat a lot of my favorite foods and make a mess every night. It tore my most interesting comic. That mouse even destroyed a cooker. Yesterday evening, when I woke up to drink some water, I found it eating bananas. Because my father was working on a night shift at that time, my mother, my younger sister and I had to catch it ourselves. This was the first time I had seen such an aggressive mouse in my house so I was so scared that I let it go. My mother said that the next time we will successfully catch it. It's really a bad mouse. Why did it have to bite my comic book? I hate it!Hi Thu. If you have any questions about my corrections, let me know. - Jason
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