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I would like someone to help me to correct this writing. Thanks. REPORT This report will cover the different ways which exist in the area of Santander to go camping. In the first place, in my opinion the best place to camp is Oyambre´s beach, because the campsite is situated in a wonderful place between mountains and the beach is close of it. Besides, it is very quiet and it has a very good equipment. Near of it there are a lot of villages to visit and enjoy eating its traditional foods. Secondly, the best time of year for camping here is the summer, because the temperature is hotter than other stations but it isn't very high. In addition, you could take a bath in the beach and visit some places which are closed in winter. For example you can visit "cuevas del soplao" where you see a old mine. Although the temperature normally is good in summer, sometimes it rains and could do cold in the night. So, I would advise everyone to bring clothes for this situations. In clonclusion, I think that this place is perfect to go camping in the summer and enjoy doing a lot of activities and taking a bath on the beach.

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I would like someone to help me to correct this writing. Thanks.

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This report will cover the different ways which exist in the area of Santander to go camping.
In the first place, in my opinion the best place to camp is Oyambre´s beach, because the campsite is situated in a wonderful place between mountains and the beach is close of to it. Besides, it is very quiet and it has a very good equipment facilities. Near of it (or Near to it) there are a lot of villages to visit and enjoy eating its traditional foods.
Secondly, the best time of year for camping here is the summer, because the temperature is hotter than other stations seasons but it isn't very high (or isn't too high). In addition, you could take a bath in on the beach and visit some places which are closed in winter. For example you can visit "cuevas del soplao" where you will/can/could see an old mine.
Although the temperature normally is good in summer, sometimes it rains and could do be cold in during the night (or cold at night). So, I would advise everyone to bring clothes for this these situations.
In conclusion, I think that this place is perfect to go camping in the summer and enjoy doing a lot of activities and taking a bath on the beach(??).

 

Well done Andres! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.


"you could take a bath on the beach" - This is grammatically correct, but it doesn't really make sense (¿bañarse en la playa?). Did you mean:

"you could sunbathe on the beach" (tomar el sol), or

"you could bathe in the sea" (bañarse en el mar)?

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I would like someone to help me to correct this writing. Thanks.

REPORT

This report will cover the different ways which/that exist in the area of Santander to go camping.
In the first place, in my opinion the best place to camp is Oyambre´s beach, because the campsite is situated in a wonderful place between mountains, and the beach is close to it as well. Besides, it is very quiet and it has a very good equipment (what type of equipment are you referring to? Or did you mean that it has very nice features?). Nearby, of it there are a lot of villages to visit and to enjoy eating its traditional foods.
Secondly, the best time of year for camping here is the Summer, because the temperature is hotter than other seasons but it isn't too high. In addition, you could take a bath on the beach and visit some places which are closed in Winter. For example you can visit "cuevas del soplao" where there is an old mine.
Although the temperature normally is good in the Summer, sometimes it rains and could be cold at night. So, I would advise everyone to bring clothes for these situations.
In clonclusion, I think that this place is perfect to go camping in the Summer and to enjoy doing a lot of activities and taking a bath on the beach.

Hi Andres, good writing. There are things in which you write very naturally. If you have questions about my corrections, let me know. Sometimes my corrections do not indicate that something is incorrect, but they show a more natural or better way of writing or saying something.  

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