Could anybody correct this text? I work in IT consulting company for two years. I work with SAP software products and systems such as SAP BW(Business warehouse), SAP BPC(Business planning and consolid

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Alexander Сhirkin

Could anybody correct this text? I work in IT consulting company for two years. I work with SAP software products and systems such as SAP BW(Business warehouse), SAP BPC(Business planning and consolidation), SAP Business Explorer and others. Now work at support project. Our team supports budget system for huge company producing metal products. My main tasks is to load data from different sources to our system during budget compaigns correctly, to correct errors occurred during the loadings, to do any changes in mapping, elements structure, query forms etc. required by users. Mapping is algorithm wich determine where every peace of data (can I use word "record" in this case?)from sources will load in our system. My work requires analytical skills, accuracy, good knowledge of system we support and software products this system uses. I haven’t been a computer lover ever. I did work as a musician before. That’s why it was pretty difficult when I was starting. I’m not too happy about sitting at the office five days every week, but I feel that working in this sphere still helps me to develop myself.

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Could anybody correct this text?

I have been working in an IT consulting company for two years. I work with SAP software products and systems such as SAP BW(Business warehouse), SAP BPC(Business planning and consolidation), SAP Business Explorer and others. Now I work at a support project. Our team supports budget systems for huge companies producing metal products. My main tasks are to load data correctly from different sources to our system during budget campaigns, to correct errors made while loading, to do any changes in mapping, elements structure, query forms etc. required by users. Mapping is an algorithm which determines where every peace of data (can I use word "record" in this case? Yes, if it's used in a database context; one record has a number of fields)from sources will load in our system. My work requires analytical skills, accuracy, a good knowledge of the system we support and software products this system uses.
I haven’t always been a computer lover. I did work as a musician before. That’s why it was pretty difficult when I was starting. I’m not too happy about sitting at the office five days every week, but I feel that working in this sphere still helps me to develop myself.

Could anybody correct this text?

I worked in IT consulting company for two years. I worked with SAP software products and systems such as SAP BW(Business warehouse), SAP BPC(Business planning and consolidation), SAP Business Explorer and others. Now I am working at a support project. Our team supports budget systems for huge companies producing metal products. My main task is to load data from different sources to our system during budget campaigns correctly, to correct errors that occur during loading, to do any changes in mapping, element structure, query forms etc. required by users. Mapping is an algorithm which determines where every piece of data (can I use word "record" in this case? You can but piece sounds better)from sources and loads it in our system. My work requires analytical skills, accuracy, good knowledge of systems we support and software products that this system uses.
I haven’t been a computer lover forever. I was a musician before. That’s why it was pretty difficult when I was started. I’m not too happy about sitting at the office for five days every week, but I feel that working in this atmosphere still helps me to develop myself.

Thank you! I don't think my corrections could help with English. But if you'll note something in Russian, let me know)

Hi, I am not a native speaker, but here is my suggestion: I work in AN IT consulting company for two years ALready. I work with SAP software products and systems such as SAP BW(Business warehouse), SAP BPC(Business planning and consolidation), SAP Business Explorer and others. I work with A support project now. Our team supports A budget system for A huge company INVOLVED INTO metal productION. My GENERAL tasks ARE: to PROPERLY load DIFFERENT data DEPRIVING FROM outer SOURCES to our LOCAL system WHILE A budget cAmpaign IS RUNING (TAKING PLACE), to correct errors WHICH MIGHT occur during THE load, to MAKE any changes THAT MIGHT BE NEEDED in mapping, elements structure, query forms etc. required by users. Mapping is AN algorithm wHich determineS AND SHOWS THE CORRECT POSSITION OF every SINGLE peace of data WITHIN THE SYSTEM. My work requires analytical skills, accuracy, good knowledge of THE system ITSELF and RELATED software products. I haven’t ALWAYS been a computer lover. I USED TO work as a musician (SOME TIME AGO). That’s why it HAS BEEN QUITE difficult FOR ME when I FIRST startED. I’m not VERY happy about sitting at the office FOR five days PER week, but WHILE working in this professional field i feel LIKE IT helps me to IMPROVE. Hope I have helped a little bit! Nice job by the way! Feel free to correct me, too. Greetings!

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