Yesterday I was with my husband in a bicycle race
Yesterday I get up at 5:00 am and I prepared my husband´s breakfast with pasta and proteint. I drunk a nutritional shake. My husband had to participate in a bicycle race. He is a dedicated rider. Although he didn´t win the race, we had a good time, sharing with his friends and mine too. While he was racing I was doing sports. I was footing, doing splits, crunches, multiple squads, a lunges mix. It was a great experience. In the afternoon we came back to house and we both were so tired than we stayed at home and set up a movie and we watched it. My son didn´t go because he had to study hard.
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Yesterday I was with my husband in a bicycle race
Yesterday I was in a bicycle race with my husband
Yesterday I get up at 5:00 am and I prepared my husband´s breakfast with pasta and proteint.
Yesterday I got up at 5:00 am and I prepared my husband's breakfast with pasta and protein.
(better: Yesterday I got up at 5:00 AM and made a breakfast of pasta and protein for my husband.)
I drunk a nutritional shake.
I drank a nutritional shake. (drunk = borracho)
My husband had to participate in a bicycle race. He is a dedicated rider.
(better syntax: My husband is a dedicated cyclist and had to participate in a race.)
Although he didn´t win the race, we had a good time, sharing with his friends and mine too.
Although he didn't win the race, we had a good time with all of our friends.
While he was racing I was doing sports. I was footing, doing splits, crunches, multiple squads, a lunges mix.
While he was racing I worked out. I did a mix (OR: a combination) of footing (??), splits, crunches, multiple squads, and lunges.
It was a great experience. In the afternoon we came back to house and we both were so tired than we stayed at home and set up a movie and we watched it.
It was a great experience. That afternoon we came back to the house and we were both were so tired that we stayed at home, set up a movie and watched it.
(better syntax: We were so tired when we got home that afternoon, all we could do was stay in and watch a movie.)
My son didn't go because he had to study hard.
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Well done! The English single apostrophe (') can be typed on a Spanish keyboard, it is just to the right of the 0.
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Yesterday I was(went) with my husband in(to) a bicycle race
Yesterday I get(got) up at 5:00 am and I prepared(made) my husband´s breakfast with pasta and proteint. I drunk (had) a nutritional shake. My husband (())* had to participate(and was going to be) in a bicycle race. ((He is a dedicated rider))*. Although he didn´t win the race, we (both) had a good time, sharing with (our friends) his friends and mine too. While he was racing I was doing sports (calisthenics, such as). I was footing, doing splits, crunches, multiple squads(squats,) a lunges mix(and lunges.) It was a great experience. In the afternoon we came back to house(home) and we both were(were both) so tired than(that) we stayed at home and set up a movie and we watched it(a movie). My son didn´t go(come with us) because he had to(stay home and) study hard.Hola Gloria! Yo hablo un poco espana. Mi lengua materna es ingles. :-)
Although I have corrected your writing, I would say that there is a lot more to be learned in order to write well in English, or any language! I hope that my adjustments/corrections are helpful to you. I am also on the great adventure of learning a new language and I have not nearly the skills you have already learned. Best wishes to you in your continued studies of English, and thank you for sharing your work here. Buenas noches!
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