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MY TRAVEL MY FRIEND LIVES IN GEEMANY, I WANT VISIT IT, BUT I NEED LEARN ENGLISH, READ, WRITE, HEAR AND TALK, CAN YOU HELP ME WITH ENGLISH?

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MY TRAVEL TRIP (Travel is the verb trip is the noun)

MY FRIEND LIVES IN GEEMANY, I WANT TO VISIT IT, BUT I NEED TO LEARN ENGLISH, TO READ,  TO WRITE,  TO HEAR AND TO TALK, CAN YOU HELP ME WITH MY ENGLISH?


Nice work! Heppy learning!

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MY TRAVEL

MY FRIEND LIVES IN GEEMANY, I WANT VISIT IT, BUT I NEED LEARN ENGLISH, READ, WRITE, HEAR AND TALK, CAN YOU HELP ME WITH ENGLISH?

My friend lives in Germany. I want to visit her/him (or "it" if you refer to the country), but I need to learn English; to read, write, listen and talk. Can you help me with my English?

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MY TRAVELS

MY FRIEND LIVES IN GERMANY.  I WANT TO VISIT IT, BUT I NEED TO LEARN ENGLISH:  READING, WRITING, HEAR LISTENING AND TALK SPEAKING.  CAN YOU HELP ME WITH ENGLISH?



Hi Paula,

Good effort!  Keep practising :).  It would be better to use upper and lower case in your typing.  Using all capitals makes it seem like you are shouting!  Here are my suggestions again in upper and lower case:

"My Travels

My friend lives in Germany.  I want to visit but I need to learn English: reading, writing, listening and speaking.  Can you help me with English?"

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