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There is nothing that we as individuals can do to prevent climate change - Part 2 In my opinion, it is impossible to revert climate change in this point due to the position adopted by the most of the countries in topics like world overpopulation, greenhouse gas emissions and the excessive exploitation of natural resources. First, the world overpopulation is a big threat because the human species takes advantage of a territory without control. In this case, we can’t do much to mitigate the effects of population growth because, although we decide not to have children, in most cases societies can’t progress with only old hand work and, on the other hand, such motivation would not prevent that in other places in our planet the populations grow and extend in its territories without obstacles.

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There is nothing that we as individuals can do to prevent climate change - Part 2

In my opinion, it is impossible to revert climate change at this point due to the increase in world population, greenhouse gas emissions and the excessive exploitation of natural resources. First, the increase in world population is a big threat because the human species takes advantage of land without thinking of the consequences. In this case, we can’t do much to mitigate the effects of population growth because, although we decide not to have children, in most cases societies can’t progress with only the labor of older generations and, on the other hand, such motivation would not be prevented in other places on our planet. The populations grow and extend in its territories without obstacles.

Good job, did you have to write a paper or were you just writing this for an entry? I was curious because your word usage is very sophisticated. 

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There is nothing that we as individuals can do to prevent climate change - Part 2

In my opinion, at this point it is impossible to revert climate change due to the position adopted by most countries regarding topics such as overpopulation, greenhouse gas emissions and the excessive exploitation of natural resources. First, the world overpopulation is a big threat because the human species takes advantage of a territory without control. In this case, we cannot do much to mitigate the effects of population growth because, although we can decide to not have children, in most cases societies cannot progress with only old hand work.  On the other hand, such motivation would not prevent that in other places in our planet the population grow and extend in its territories without obstacles.

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